6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Gracie Ravenclaw Girl Chapter 1

6th August 2011:
I was almost in tears at this. It was so well writen. I loved it :)

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Review #2, by Casey Chapter 1

25th November 2008:
That was amazing!!! Great job... it was very deep. I also liked how you switched the points of view. Great job!!!

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Review #3, by lilyjames_maraudersirius Chapter 1

6th May 2008:
its beautiful...really well written.
i dont have words to describe it, its amazing, heartwrenchingly, touchingly, poignantly amazing.

Author's Response: thankyou :)

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Review #4, by Smiling Ghost Chapter 1

20th November 2007:
Beautiful

Author's Response: thanks :)

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Review #5, by GriffinClaw Chapter 1

19th November 2007:
Wow, that was great. I absolutely loved it. I was wondering how it was going to work, and the 2-3 paragraphs the 6 main members of the DA was perfect. Each character was true to their characters, but Ron's, Neville's, and Luna's were my favorites. I like how you explored different parts of each the emotions. Great ending, that ending paragraph was a fantastic place to close.

Author's Response: thanks so much! I really enjoyed writing Ron's piece, I think the loss of Fred is just terribly tragic for the entire Weasley family, and it is a very interesting subject to explore in his stunned thoughts, although very sad. If you enjoyed this please check out my other post-DH fics :)

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Review #6, by doremi_dancer Chapter 1

19th November 2007:
That was really wonderful! I'm glad you ended just with 'Dumbledore's Army' rather than some closing sentence. The piece was very well done.

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing :) yeah, I agree with you about that, I wrote a few versions of the ending but eventually decided that in the end the only thing about these six brave souls that truly mattered was that they were united in the fight against Voldemort, and I thought "Dumbledore's Army" said it best, and most simply.

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