95 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Donny An Interview and The Future

4th July 2017:
Gosh this chapter really makes me excited to keep reading!! I always wondered what Gabrielle and Harry would have been like. But the idea of amazonia is amazing! Ill keep reading even if its been a few years!

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Review #2, by Nate The Seeker's Challenge

30th October 2014:
I like this series even though it deviates from what JK Rowling
said would eventually happen, but Harry should really turn out
as an Auror,, not a pro quidditch player.

Author's Response: I went back and forth on it quite a bit. And yea he probably would just based on his attitude but the elder wand hanging over his head is what made me go another way. I doubt Harry would even think about it until he loses a duel and someone steals it but I give him more credit. Thanks for reading.

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Review #3, by Amy The Vision Serpent

1st July 2014:
So Harry is finally dating a girl who is shallow, too focused on looks, and only thinks of Harry as a famous person who is also attractive?

Plus, even though it was never the case, Harry is starting to like attention? That is so out of character.

I was really pleased with the idea of the story originally and had thought that Harry and Ginny needed to separate a bit to clear out their heads. But slowly, Harry is becoming a nonentity. He has no opinions or backbone. He is calling strangers, who he barely knew for 3 months, mom and dad. Plus, almost every girl around him is giggly and is without any sense at all.

If Harry had to fall for someone, I would have guessed that it would be someone who was kind, who didn't constantly mock him, and someone who actually cared about him and his privacy. Right now, he is with someone who...is only good to look at and has an ulterior motive.

Author's Response: Amy
You are one of the few people who picked up on that part of Adriana from the start. Or at least have commented on it. You have also explained why it won't last and it's only a matter of time.
Adriana is not someone he fell for more of a situation he jumped into after missing out on his chance with Cho. That was how I always in-visioned it.
Harry enjoying attention was something I struggled with. However now that he is not being hunted down and can enjoy life attention for the right reasons is something he won't mind. However again Adriana is not really that type to bring out the good attention.
As to Don and Christina Harry bonds closely with friends/ family. In an exchange situation like that it is not unusual to call the folks you live with like that. Having been through an exchange myself, which was the inspiration for the story, I felt it was appropriate during his time there. Once he returns home, in the sequel, that will not be the case.

I agree I should work on a little depth of character on some of the other students. I'm not sure where a good place to build that up would be.

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Review #4, by Amy Dueling Club

1st July 2014:
What I don't understand is why Harry is being such a wuss. Why the eff is he feeling guilty of all things? Who in the world goes out to a duel without panties on? And then she has the nerve to accuse him?

The number of pranks that keep happening to Harry are getting more than a bit pathetic. He isn't an idiot and is not that easily embarra ssed. And if it was me, if someone was embarra ssing me that frequently, I would be in a really foul mood and would burst out once.

Author's Response: Amy

A combination of cultural unfamiliarity and typical Harry feeling guilty about everything can account for most of that. This chapter was mostly for fun but could probably could use some tweaks. I would be interested in some of your other opinions since you're new to the story. Feel free to reach out to me at dondamon40 at yahoo

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Review #5, by brunogpa@aol.com Answers Maybe

5th May 2014:
I have been reading your story and am surprised how forgetful you and Harry both are. Does he or does he not have a phoenix? Hello?!? Could he not summon Fawkes or a house elf (Kretcher) to escape or send a message? I have thought that there were a few places that Fawkes would have been useful. Like when the snakes attacked the students. Seems like such a versitile character has been nothing more then a footnote and demoted to a letter carrier and even at that you rarely mention or use Fawked. I doubt that you will read this as it seems your newest story has not been updated in 5-6 months, so I doubt I will get a response.

Author's Response: The funny thing is that is precisely what happens in the next chapter. Honestly Fawkes may be one of my greatest regrets with the story. Not for his lack of involvement but that I involved him at all. He is just too versatile and awesome. It is too hard to put Harry in a compromising situation when he has a get out of jail free card.

As to the delay on the newest story it is a computer issue and life issue. I'm hoping to have the update shortly. Even with the issues though I do try to get here to respond to comments and I appreciate yours.

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Review #6, by Amelia The Seeker's Challenge

8th November 2013:
Any ideas about when you might start posting the sequel? I'm DYING to find out how everything goes upon his return to England. I simply fell in love with your story and i have started to reread it while waiting for the sequel

Author's Response: I am actually thinking about posting the first few chapters today. I am having serious issues with the title. Mostly because I don't know how long it will actually be. Look for some updates soon.

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Review #7, by dtinch The Seeker's Challenge

31st October 2013:
I read you are having trouble with a title you could go for a book two and subtitle it later i think just a suggestion Or you could since know your story think about what you consider the most important Character (opposite of Harry of course unless he isn't) and use his most important attribute or the most important object like j.k. used the Hollows.

Author's Response: Interesting suggestions. I will definitely think about about those options.

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Review #8, by Brooke Quidditch Practice and Picnics

24th October 2013:
Good story, but sometimes hard to understand without proper punctuation..

Author's Response: I tried very hard to get it as correct as possible. Unfortunately I have an engineer brain not an english teacher's. Grammar was never my strong suit. If I can ever find someone with time and desire I would love to give it a polish.

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Review #9, by Harry1987 The Seeker's Challenge

11th October 2013:
I can't wait for the next part of the series.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm trying to find an appropriate title so I can start posting

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Review #10, by Leonore The Seeker's Challenge

2nd October 2013:
I love your originality in this story, the way you planned the plot so well. I love the way you developed Amazonis and built up your characters. You have thought it through well and tied up most of the loose ends. An excellent read, well done.


Author's Response: Thank you, and I know there are a few loose ends but I am working on the sequel as we speak. The first chapter will be posted shortly once I figure out what I want the title to be.

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Review #11, by Derek The Seeker's Challenge

24th September 2013:
Awesome Awesome Awesome! SO looking forward to the sequel. So glad you came back and finished the story.

Author's Response: Thanks Derek, you know I could use a beta reader someone to find those annoying mistakes and errors before I post chapters. If you're interested shoot me an e-mail at dondamon40atyahoo

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Review #12, by Jono The Seeker's Challenge

21st September 2013:
Awesome story! I really enjoyed reading it. What's the name of the sequel?

Author's Response: When I figure that out I will post it on this story's description.

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Review #13, by Christopher Weekend in Rio

16th September 2013:
Another incredible chapter, to an awesome story. I can't wait until Harry gets back to England and reunites with Ginny. I also think it would be hilarious for him to appear in front of the Weasleys in his animangus form, that would give them a great scare as they are still unaware of his animangus form. Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I'm already going toward that direction with the animagus but a little differently. But that will be the sequel. This story ends with his leaving Brazil. The final chapter should be up in a day or two. I had an awful time doing it.

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Review #14, by hpfan Weekend in Rio

2nd September 2013:
Awesome story waiting for next chapter.

Author's Response: The next is the last. A sequel is in the works to reunite the group.

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Review #15, by Derek Return to Amazonis

28th July 2013:
Awesome that Harry will soon meet up with the trio and bring his future diplomats "contacts" with him to see hogwats.

Author's Response: Gonna be a buzzkill Derek, This story is going to finish with his journey home. The next one including going to Australia will pick up where it left off.

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Review #16, by Johnny Nightmare Return to Amazonis

27th July 2013:
You are an excellent writer. keep up the good work. The only advice I have for you is to please write faster.

Author's Response: Lol good news Johnny this adventure ends in a few more chapters. More should be up shortly

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Review #17, by Derek Revelations

24th July 2013:
WOW! Didnt see that one coming at all. The ministers daughter but looking back at it a couple chapters ago when there was really nothing wrong with the ministers daughter it makes sense. Thank you so much for continuing the story and over coming the writers block.

Author's Response: It really pained me to write this chapter. I loved the character of Luciana so much. Mostly because I love the person who she's based on. To turn her into some manipulative witch was horrible.

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Review #18, by Derek Rescue Plans

17th July 2013:
Great Chapter! loved how Harry is using kreacher for his spying and giving him the updates. I can see ron and herm's showing up anyway and helping a friend out and not letting him do this by himself (not really). Re-unite the trio. This chapeter sort of tied up what was going to happen in the next with lots of action. Thanks for continuing the story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Derek, the trio is going to reunite back home. I love some of my Originals too much to let others take the credit lol. Next chapter coming up tomorrow or day after

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Review #19, by DEREK Rescue Plans

16th July 2013:
Hiatus for two years!!! this was a great fantastic story...

Author's Response: I know :( there are some things that prevented me from being able to post more. But honestly it was mostly my own writers block. I couldn't figure out how to tie all the loose ends together properly. That is pretty well sorted. Next Chapter should be up in a couple of days.

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Review #20, by PhoenixSeeker  Harry's Transformation

4th October 2011:
Really interesting chapter, I forgot how creative you are and I love your style! I had to re read the last chapter to remember what had happened, other than that excellent!

Hope the next one is up soon :D

Author's Response: Working on it big time. I'm trying to make it speak to everyone the way it does to me. Hopefully it will flow and start wrapping up the story nicely.

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Review #21, by Derek Harry's Transformation

18th June 2011:
Been a while. Hopefully the updates come more often. Harry turned into a Gargoyle. Impressive!!

Author's Response: Not quite a Gargoyle. But it is something that is holy unique. Of course the details won't be revealed for another chapter or two.

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Review #22, by Willy_fruhog Answers Maybe

16th June 2011:
Wow...it's a great story:) cannot wait for the next chapter:) it's really hard to tell what's gonna happen from now on...:) love it!!:)

Author's Response: Well i'm cleaning it up and going to post it in the next day or two, and thats the goal.

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Review #23, by Phoenix seeker Answers Maybe

1st April 2011:
Ooo this is amazing! When will the next part be up?

Author's Response: Working on it as we speak. There's only a few chapters total left to go.

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Review #24, by PhoenixSeeker  Pegasus Vs Draco

24th March 2011:
Excellent!!! Love it keep it up

Author's Response: Its been a while but the chapters are coming back up and the story is finishing. I hope you're reading the new ones.

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Review #25, by Phoenix Seeker Halloween

24th March 2011:
WOW! Amazing so far, I am so caught up that I haven't commented yet and even when I do remember there is never any fast Internet. Anyway you have such a creative imagination, this is sooo original while keeping the cannon series slightly linked! Looking forward to the next chapter .
Xxxx keep up the good work

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