I loved it! And yes totally write a sequel an post it up! This story was so simple yet so deep. Thank goodnes for me clicking that amazing random story button. Surprisingly, the two times I clicked it, Dramione popped up. And let me tell you, I am a Dramione fanatic! Anyway loved it, post a sequel, 10/10 (: Report Review
This was so simple, but the impact it had was amazing.
I love how you used short sentance structure to be to the point, to me it kind of represented her mind. The simple, short sentances.
Really good, I don't think there needs to be a sequel, I think it's better as a one-shot; the plot suits it. Report Review
I love this! :)
I'm such a sucker for sad Dramione stories. To some extent, I love reading about them being happy together. But then there's also this part of me that likes to dwell on the fact that they are the type of couple who never really end up together for real, no matter how much love they actually share. Report Review
Please don't try to add more, its perfect. Report Review
aww..this is so sweet!
i love it. great job. im looking forward to reading more.
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plz write a sequel. a happy one. this was lovely. Report Review
whoooa, great story! ^_^ Report Review
please please please write a sequel that was really good
10/10 Report Review
What did they do to cure them of their mental illness? I guess they were in for spell damage of some type? The fact that she can't (or won't) remember anything about herself makes me think of Lockhart. I can see the good points in leaving it here or in adding to it. If you leave it here, it's open to so many possibilities in the reader's mind. If you finish it, you have to answer hard questions about mental health and overcoming serious trauma and moving on for real and what life is like afterwards for all parties. It would be very draining to write, but could be beautiful to experience. this was original (at least, I've never read anything like it yet). Thanks for sharing it.
JillianAuthor's Response: wow...thanks for the biggest review I've ever gotten! I actually decided to do sequel...kind of. It's called Black. and shows the story from Draco's point of view, who DOES remember... Report Review
omg! that was so good! it's so sweet that they helped each other regain sanity! i don't think you should do a sequel though. it's simple and sweet the way it is... amazing story! 10/10! Report Review
omg!! i loved it! i totally think u hould do a sequel. it was so sad at the end, that she didnt remember, but i thought it was wonderful.
keep up the good work Report Review
Awww, t's so sweet, and yet sad. You NEED to write a sequal, if only to give Hermione a better ending. There are so many true stories with sad endings, so when you write somthing, make it deep, make it meaningful, and make it's ending the best it can be, for life isn't always happy, so why can't we give oursevles good resolutuonis when we can. I really did like it, pleaze pleaze pleaze write a sequal.
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ok so sensitive
that just put my mind into depression mode.. Report Review
Aw, I love it! 10/10 Report Review
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