wow! Without dialogue but you managed to create this enticing story still! Well done! You've got great talent!
10/10
luv ya
Ava
xoxo

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Beautiful, really. I liked the uplifting ending :)

Author's Response: Yay! I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the read and reivew.

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So beautiful, your descriptions held me in your story the whole time. Very sweet, loved the ending, it gave some hope for the characters who had just been through hell.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I couldn't have said it better myself. :]

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I love short stories like this. I think shorter ones have more impact and yours delivers that in a really good way.

I also love Harry Ginny stories too!

Great Job!
X

Author's Response: Thank you lots and lots!

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This was really lovely work. I’m just sorry it’s taken so long to get to it! I think you portrayed Ginny’s emotions very well. I’ve always found her to be a character that left me cold – but I really empathised with her in your story… and I place a lot of value in characterisation – so kudos for that.

You are a very strong writer, your turn of expression is clear and there is a lovely fluidity to your work. I think you worked really well within the parameters of the challenge :)

One thing I have to say that I really enjoyed was the symmetry between the mood and the emotion brewing which was reflected in the weather. It’s a simple but very effective way of injecting a strong ambiance within your story.

Note: Now in terms of the results of the challenge, I had intended to notify everyone today but unfortunately have just run into a little blip along the way one of the entrants. As such I cannot post the results just now (it will likely be a few more days in which case I shall PM you all) but I did feel it was time to post all of the reviews. The reason for the delay is that I wanted to post all reviews at the same time for fairness really… that and a pinch of procrastination.

Author's Response: Cool! Thank you so much for all the praise! I don't know even what to do with myself! :] Can't wait to see the results!

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Wow, I wrote this a long time ago (or so it seems) and I just went back and re- read it. I actually really like it! Huh! I never really like my writing. Anyway, thank you to everyone who reviewed!

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Gorgeous! I love it. The descriptions are SO vivid! I really wish I could write like that.

Author's Response: Awe, that's so sweet. Thank you!

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That was good. I really like the longing feeling you get when your reading no matter how much you read it. Great!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, glad to see that the correct emotion got portrayed!

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i loved this one-shot! ten outa ten =)

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Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I love your language, your descriptions and your sentence structures. This is definitely a favourite!

~Kelly(Kelstar on the forums)

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much!

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Aw, I wicked loved that! So cute. Keep writing, you're very talented.

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A well written one-shot. Well done. I'd say you lived up to the challenge of no dialogue really well!

Author's Response: *blushes* THANK you so much! I appreciate the praise!

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Hi, I've just seen the review you left me and well, I got curious and went to read one of your stories. Well, it's really good this one-short, seriously. It's nice, it's sweet and well written. I especially liked the "drip, drip, drip; slpash, splash, splash". Well done.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you. I do that all the time. I'm like, 'hmmm...this person left a good review... i'll go look at their author's page!'" Thank you so much for reviewing, and for the feedback! :]

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Aww. So cute. I loved how you had the weather mirroring Ginny's emotions that she was like everything to Harry. Way to go. =D

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I like it a lot! good job! :)

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beautiful writing.

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This was a very nice story.

Author's Response: thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time to review! :]

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Good story. In the 6th paragraph--"Encumbered" does not work there. I think you mean encountered.

Author's Response: You know, I just looked back into the pages where I wrote it down, and i had encountered! I must of spelled it wrong on the computer and it auto- corrected it for me. But thank you so much for letting me know, I just fixed it. :]

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Wow...the imagery in this is phenomenal! Very good.

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Really nice way to tie up the loose ends at the end of DH. It was short and sweet. I hope you keep writing more stories.

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I really liked this! I can`t say much more about it now, because it was so short, but I hope to read more of it soon:) Liked how you described Ginnys feelings.

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that was sweet!

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It was very nice. I liked the simplicity of Harry and Ginny's reunion which is rather rare to see.

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