Wow, You really nailed Sirius. The characterization was wonderful, especially the beginning with the motorcycle. I could practically see him up there speeding along happily. I do wish that yo uhad gone a little deeper into his emotions and feelings, but it is still a wonderful story. The paragraph which tied into the title so well was beautifully written, it really makes you think about how quickly he went from being a hero to a murderer. Really good job with this story, it was a great little Sirius piece Report Review
Brilliantly done, truly masterful! You really bring the story to life! Now I have a question, why didn't you write the Harry Potter books?! 10/10Author's Response: *blushing* Thank you for the huge compliment. You're really making my head swell up here. I'm also thrilled that you enjoyed this story as much as you did, I was really proud of the way this one turned out.
As for why didn't I write the HP books? Well, I guess I couldn't bribe my agent enough to put a cover on my fanfiction and my initials are one letter off. I'm JLR instead of JKR. lol I am flattered beyond words that you think my writing is comparable to Rowlings' though. =) - Jenn Report Review
great story! it fits the books perfectly.Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am very pleased with the way this one turned out. - Jenn Report Review
its so great! really. its d best hpff ever.Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm always happy to hear that my stories are enjoyed by my readers. - Jenn Report Review
Another interesting short fanfic! I have to admit that I've never been a fan of Sirius and always saw him as a self-involved glory hound. This story does help me to see him in a more human light, however, so well done!Author's Response: I am humbled by your admission. To know that my words moved you enough to see a particular character in a different light is an experience beyond words. As a writer, this is the moment that I've always dreamed and hoped for and it is gratifying to know that I reached at least one person.
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart. Your review means more to me than words can say. - Jenn Report Review
Wow, that was written so well! I love how it gave a clear picture of what happened - I love the missing memory moments. It was sad, but you did a wonderful job with it! I just love your writing style. Everything flowed so well and you did a great job!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the compliments. I'm thrilled to know that you enjoyed this story in spite of the underlying sadness and angst. - Jenn Report Review
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