That really wouldn't work coz Albus wud hav 2 kill harry 2 b da 'true' master of the elder wand...please don't tell me harry's gonna b killed in this!!
it's gd really, it's constructive critism!!
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Nobody can speak to snakes now... Harry couldn't after the part of LV was split from him so his children wouldn't be able to. Report Review
This story gets worse every chapter...
Wands don't recognize new owners just because a new person has them, Albus would need to defeat Harry for the Elder wand to recognize him as its master. Report Review
Its a good story, I like the plot. But you need to have someone proof read it. Gregorovitch's shop? He was killed by LV in DH... Report Review
This was a great chapter, definitely the best. It deserves a great review! ;) Report Review
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