This story is really cute and i can't wait to read what happens next.

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i like the way that the story is going can't wait to read more.

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Really good chapter and just where did Lily go? Guess we'll find out soon, huh?

Author's Response: Yes, probably. ^_^ (The next chapter, actually. :D)

Thank you for reviewing, Snapegirl! (Behind the Sketches has been updated again, just so you know!)

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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i think she is once again pregnant or possibly she is feeling bad about her husbands death

i think this story is awesome btw

:D

Author's Response: Yes, apparently she is and I might fix things up on this chapter. *sigh* There's supposed to be a whole year of no children except Marcey and Nick.

I'll update soon, I promise. :)

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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Aw, I loved this one. It was so cool seeing Sev and Margo and Marcy together as a happy family and Sev can be such a charmer. I like the idea of Harry and Sisi being vampires, it kind of reminds me of the book Twilight which is another of my fav's.

And I'm glad you liked my idea for Sirius's costume and I think Ginger would make a great genie, although Sirius might have to beat off guys with a stick . . .!

Perhaps Sev's family could go as characters from Lord of the Rings . . .Sev could be Elrond, Margo could be Galadriel, and Marcy could be a baby elf, or maybe a hobbit. Just an idea . . .

As for what's going on with Margo, I'd say, being the sister of an OB/GYN with eleven neices and nephews . . .she's probably pregnant again. Guess Sev just can't keep his hands off his wife, huh? LOL!

Author's Response: Yeah, you're right. :D lol! Yes, Margo's pregnant again. Haha...

Hmm... I'm still kind of picky over Sev and Margo.

lol to the Sirius thing!

I'll update soon and I'll go and read your fic. My life is sort of boring now-a-days.

Your (Odd) writer,
~Meli♥

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By the way I loved all the dialogue in Spanish, are you a native speaker of it? I took it in HS and Italian in college, but I'm nowhere near fluent anymore.

I'd probably wear something loose and flowy, I like turquoise shades and comfortable heels, pretty but not ostentatious. Maybe with a silver cat mask, since I like cats.

Sev I can see in tux and maybe green robes, since he doesn't want to wear black ALL the time. And he looks smashing in green too!

Sirius . . .would probably look good in just about anything, but I can see him in a pirate costume, sort of like Jack Sparrow, he's got that devilish smile and look about him.

Check out my fic when you've got time. Will we be getting any more journals from others POV? And will we see more of Marcy, Margo and Sev?

Author's Response: We'll see more of Marcy, Margo, and Sev in the next chapter (on your request, of course ;]). Severus and everyone else's costumes will be shown later on.

Yes, I'm a native speaker. :D You used to be fluent in Italian??? That's cool!!

I'll see about that costume of yours...

Your (odd, creative-at-times, and artistic) writer,
~Meli♥

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Yes, I'm so happy they got back together again. And let's pray that things go smoothly from here on out. As for the wedding, I think Ron will be the best man and Maybe Ginger the matron of honor, since she's married. I think it should be a small one, since we all know that Harry doesn't like to be in the public eye. And for some reason I'm seeing green dresses on the bridal party. And like in the dream, Sev walks Cicily down the aisle.

Author's Response: :) Nice ideas, Snapegirl. I'll probably do some fix ups for later. They have one month left and there's enough time left for readings from the journals and the occassional journeys through Sev's penceive. :D

Your (crazy, peculiar, busy) writer,
~Meli♥

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Okay so, the Anti-Gone Charm kind of felt like a deux ex machina even though it didn't work for James. I don't know if you know what that is so I'll explain it.

It's a technique that is used in films, plays, book, ect. to help the characters get out of a situation. It usually involves someone older and wiser coming in and telling everyone what they're supposed to do and how to fix everything.

But in this case it was a spell. I'm glad it didn't work because then that would have been taking the easy way out even if I do want Lily and James back together.

By the way, it's supposed to be ciao not chow. Unless that's supposed to be Sirius' way of being funny. lol

Also, Cicily's dream was so sad. And in a way, it was disturbing too. For a second, I thought that you changed you mind on them getting back together and then getting married.

Wow, my longest review ever! You should feel special! lol *grins*

Author's Response: Um... I don't know what you mean about the Anti-Gone charm and yes, it actually did work for James. :D Lily came back on the wedding day, which will be explained later.

"Chow" is actually how you pronounce the word in Argentina and other Central & South American countries. I think that I spelled it wrong, but I've always used it.

Hmm... yes, Sisi's dream was sad. It's supposed to deal with the Anti-Gone Charm. The same thing happened to Lily except it lasted for about a week.

Thank you for this long review. :D (and yes, I actually do feel speciel. ;])

Your busy escritora,
~Meli♥

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WE IM A FREAK BUT I LIKE THIS STORY WE!

Author's Response: YAY! :D

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Well, that's a lot of questions, do I get points for guessing the correct answer?

The car, maybe that was Petunia and Vernon leaving, or maybe Pam has a Muggle relative who dropped her off?

Harry and Sisi better get married soon, and please do a scene where Sev and Harry discuss how damn mad Harry made Sev over his hurting Sisi, I think it'd do the both of them some good to get all that tension off their chests. (plus, I love it when Sev goes all parental on Harry, God knows he needs it, and they really DO act like father and son.)
Yes, a lot of the things Lily and James say remind me a little of Harry and Ginny sometimes.

Sev's question: I think harry kept the ring somewhere safe, intending to maybe give it back to her one day.

As for the diaries, i think you should let us hear Sev's thoughts and how about Remus, he's always been the quiet one of the group, it'd be neat to hear his side of things, him being a werewolf and all.

As always, I really love this fic, keep writing!

I hope my chapter gets updated soon!
Other than that, I

Author's Response: Hmm... points? I don't have the power to give points, Snapegirl, but at least you'll get one review added to your current reviews. :)

Pam Apparated and the car was Lily's. XD

Yes, Harry and Sisi might get married soon. Hmm... I'll probably do that scene... (don't worry, I'm thinking about it already!)

Sev's question: Yes, that's probably it (since Harry's pretty sensible in this fic)...

I haven't talked about Remus since forever! Thank you for pointing that out!

Thank you for the compliments, for I will read your fic as well! (Hopefully that chapter is up soon... because I'm willing to read now!)

Your writer,
~Meli♥

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I think James might have a bit of a thing for pie. lol But then again, who doesn't like pie? Pie could solve the world's problems if everyone would just take the time to stop fighting and sit down and eat some pie together. lol I'm rambling again.

Ok so, was the car Lily's? Like maybe she was coming back for the other pie? I hope that Harry and Cicily get back together soon. They both seem miserable without each other.

Author's Response: Seemingly... yes, the car was Lily's. *chuckles* It happens...

Of course, I won't tell you if they are or if they aren't getting back together. (Yes, even if they seem miserable without each other)

James... yes, he's got a thing for pie. (later he'll get one to himself, I'm sure!)

~Meli♥
P/s: The pie was the only thing that I could come up with. ^_^

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Who's is he? Maybe Harry's and Cicily's? Or maybe Sev and Margo's? And will you ever do a chapter with Sev's journal? That would be really cool. I liked this chapter, it was funny and sweet at the same time.

I'll be posting soon, right around January third!

Author's Response: Awesome. :D

Well, you've got the answer already (about Dionysus... about Dion... that's his nickname!).

Maybe I should narrow it down... He's Sev and Margo's. Since no one really does read around the reviews, this is pretty much a secret...

YAY! (Funny and Sweet? I wonder why...)

Happy 2008, dear Snapegirl. I hope that you have a pleasant year.

Your (busy, creative, brought back to Art and Psychology projects... by not doing anything...) writer,
~Meli♥

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Hmmm Let me think... Dionysus. Cicily and Harry's kid? Possibly? I dunno.

If Ginger and Sirius have a kid named Romulus then it would make sense for then to have a kid named Remus too. But only if they were twins. lol

Have a Happy New Year!

Author's Response: [going on backwards sequence!]

You too! Hmm... I didn't think about that... (aren't those two the kids that were raised by a wolf-ish mother or something? and they founded Rome? I'm just trying to dig that out... Oh well, that really does sound like a good idea, you know. :D)

Nope, Dionysus isn't Cicily and Harry's kid. *lol* I can't believe that no one has noticed anything yet! (I put Marcella and his name up for a reason, dude!!)

Well, I hope that you get it.

I'll update soon (and we have one more day until new year's eve!!!).

Your (crazy, wacky, & yet creative...) writer,
~Meli♥

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Let me guess. Markus broke up with Ginny, right? Sounds about right. Unless she got attacked by Dionysus or something. lol jk

I have a feeling that the thing with Dionysus is one of those things that doesn't make sense until you know about it. And then you just want to smack yourself because then it seems so obvious. lol

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Alright, I'll update soon. :D Dionysus will make himself appear sooner or later (hint: he's the son of one of our favorite pairings...).

There ya go! Now try to find out who he belongs to.

You're right about Ginny though, but it was just a missunderstanding (this is mentioned in the next chapter).

Thank you for coming by to review! Have a Happy New Year!!

~Meli♥

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Maybe markus broke up with her? Or maybe she overheard something about someone else that made her upset? As for Harry and Sisi, I think Harry needs to make up his mind once and for all who he really loves (like Hermione told him) and then go and talk with her. And if he loves Sisi, he has some groveling to do, and he'd better do it quick, before Severus loses his temper and punches Harry out.

Author's Response: True, true. :D

~Meli♥
P/s: The answer: The Anti-Gone Charm. :] (Which is a chapter after The Wedding)

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What? Why?? Guess I'll have to read some more, but that was so totally unexpected. And I love when Sev gets all overprotective with his daughters.

Author's Response: Yay!!!

Well, Harry & Cicily's problem will be kinda... well, I can't really tell you... let's just wait until the next few chapters are submitted!

Your writer,
~Meli♥

P/s: I love it when Sev's like that too!

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YOU BROKE THEM UP!?!?!?!?!? WHY? Please tell me it's a momentary lapse of judgement or something! They seemed so happy together!

Was it because Harry was looking at Ginny?? He could have just been looking at her protectively like an older brother would have been.

Yay! I got mentioned! lol

Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'll update today, I promise. (Oh, James' journal will be back again!!)

~Meli♥
P/s: The chapter title: "Forsaking Flower"

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hmm. i think Carter or Isabelle would be cute.. hmmm who knows.. Merry Christmas :]

Author's Response: Merry Christmas to you too. :D

I shall update in a few minutes. I hope that you keep reading!

~Meli♥

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Oh, Mr. Black, he's such a tease! I like him better here than I ever did in the HP books, though. He's not such a snot the way you write him. As for the christening, will it be similar to the one I had in Bronze Dragons? 'Cause all I did was take the normal Catholic (for me) ceremony and add bits of magic and stuff. Can't wait to see Harry with Marcey!

Names for Gin and Sirius's kids . . .how about Remus James (you could call him R.J. or Remy for short). Or Alaina Margo, I've always liked Alaina for a girl. Or if you want to go with the star theme (like in Sirius's name) you could call a girl Casseopia (Cassie) or a boy Perseus (Percy).

That's all the ideas I've got at the moment.

Oh and one more thing, if you ever get tired of reading HP fiction and want to try something different, I've got an original novel posted about Loki the Norse god on fictioncentral.net called Magician of Asgard. So far I've gotten nice reviews and everyone thinks its really funny.

Keep updating and I'll keep reading:)

Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Alaina reminds me of Aly in the Trickster's Queen series by Tamora Pierce... hmm... nice name pics honestly. :D

Cool! I'll go and read it (the original novel that you've got)!

Thanks. You too, Snapegirl. *smiles*

~Meli♥
P/s: [Currently re-reading Twilight for the third time -- so as to give me inspiration for "Behind the Sketches"]

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Awww Ginger and Sirius are so cute together! And Severus being a daddy is so cute! And Ginger and Sirius are getting married soon!

James is so childish. lol But then again they were in 2nd year so I guess it's okay.

Let's see, is Dionysus the name of the priest that's gonna christen Marcey? lol That kind of just popped into my head.

Author's Response: asian, you aren't even close! Oh well... James was childish and he'll probably start to develop the annoy-ishness that he tries to keep at bay... in his third year (when he starts growing up into a teenager!). So yeah.

Hmm... that's true you know -- Sirius and Ginger being cute together! :D I'm glad that you like Severus being a Dad.

God - I can't wait to write Sirius and Ginger's wedding!!!

More drama is on the way with Harry/Cicily - just so you know. :]

Your escritora,
~Meli♥

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Aw, I loved Sev and Marcey, it was so cute and so funny! I'll bet he'll look great in the pictures, he always does! And I wonder what he's got in mind for Margo? Something involving kissing, perhaps?

And I'm taking a guess here, but I think Dion might refer to either Harry's or maybe Ginger's upcoming baby?

Author's Response: :D I'm glad that you liked the Father and child scene. :] Anyway... yeah, he probably has that in mind for her.

Hmm... no, Dion isn't either of the couple's children. You aren't even close. :) I'll hint at it the whole way though!

Anyway, currently I'm trying to finish up the next chapter, doing my IB Art sketchbook, and finishing up reading the fics I like before 2008 (I need to make it to 600 reviews or more -- because if I don't... I really won't feel accomplished, so yeah, expect a review. :D).

Oh! James' journal will be put into detail later and a traditional diary will enter the fic (and I now ask you: who's is it?).

Your escritora,
~Meli♥

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Is Dionysus, besides being the god of wine and fertility, someone's kid? Did someone else have a baby that we don't know about? lol Unless they plan on inviting a god to Marcey's christening. lol

I think it's cute that ginger and Sirius were each other's first kiss. That's so cute!!!

Author's Response: Dionysus is actually... hmm... a name of a future character. :D ((Someone might have a baby that we don't know about - yet. :])

You have good guesses though, asian. lol!

Your writer/escritora,
~Meli♥

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Woot! Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: :D Thanks, asian! I can't wait for your next chapter either, you know. :)

Your writer,
~Meli♥
P/s: I'm serious, just so you know. :]

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Well,I know you read mine and liked it, and I liked this one and can't wait to see Sirius's reaction to Sev and Gin kissing! ooo boy, he's gonna hit the roof! And maybe you could put some of Sev and Marcella in the next part--there's something abou Sev and babies that really appeals to me.

Author's Response: Haha... I knew you'd say that! I'm still working on the next chapter and there's a likely chance that I'm going to change the chapter titles. They aren't so interesting and they aren't really "Mulcted" memories, so yeah. I'm going to fix the titles - not the fic though, okay?

I'll update soon, promise!

Your writer,
~Meli♥
P/s: You better update!

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i lovee this story... it's soo good. hope you have a nice day :]

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, smeileyface!

Your writer,
~Meli♥
P/s: I'll be updating soon, just so ya know. :)

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