The inner battle you portrayed was brilliant ^^ And gosh, I loved that he decided not to ask, but to let Sirius go where he'd be happier.
Beautiful story. A bit short. But I guess it was more effective this way than stretching it out and repeating stuff. Beautiful.Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I know what you mean about stretching things out - I try really hard not to do that, but my stuff ends up short. My other Regulus fic is on fanfiction.net because it's too short to put up here! Report Review
OMG i love the way you write! it's AMAZING! bloody effing brilliant!
i so wish i had this kind of emotional power! so original and downright wicked!
kbavAuthor's Response: Thank you so much. I'd say I don't deserve your praise, but that sounds ungrateful. Thank you! Report Review
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