aww i liked that not talking brought them together! so cute 10/10 :) Report Review
i love lily and james=)
they're the best, and this story
was great for them. Report Review
Aw.so sweet! Really cute idea and portrayal of both characters! Report Review
Another Lily James romance, but the best kind (sweet and funny, but none of it over done). I liked it, you are an awsome writer! :) Report Review
oh.My.God.! THAT WAS SO AMAZING! oh wow i loved it!Author's Response: Wow thanks!
Great review hehe! Report Review
awww this was so cute! Report Review
LOVE IT! Funny and sweet, it's subtle and very creative. LOVE IT, LOVE IT! 100/10
-BeautyLoonyKeeperAuthor's Response: Thank you hun! I appreciate it. Report Review
This is sooo cute!! I love the plot, the way the characters expressed themselves; everything! Adorable! 10/10!
sweetys (:Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it! Report Review
it was reely great i loved it !!!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Interesting idea- I think it would be even more awesome if it was longer. :)Author's Response: I know haha thanks though! Report Review
that's adorable!! so cute and such a creative idea. it might add more to the plot if you add a little more to the part when she can't talk, for instance, how did she answer stuff in class, and other things that showed the james really helped her. but this was really good!Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! My one-shots are always very simple -shrugs- Report Review
Quite a nice little story. I was going to send a blank review in honor of the title, saying that I was speechless about your story, but I wasn't sure that would work. Or if it would, others would have already tried it. I've not read any Marauders-era stories before yours, but I know what was told about them in the books. I liked this little incident that may or may not have had much to do with the change in attitudes James and Lily had for one another. There were just a few little errors in grammar and typing, but nothing very bad. All in all, a very enjoyable story. Thank you for your story.Author's Response: Actually I don't think anyone has tried that haha but its a cute idea to leave a blank review! I love the Marauders but haven't written much about them so this was fun for me. Thanks for reviewing! I'm super glad you liked it! Report Review
so freaking cute. i love it!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
aww, I thought this was really cute:)Author's Response: I'm glad, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
very cute and adorable story. i think i will add it to my favs list.
~ Bye, super GrangerAuthor's Response: Thanks! =) Report Review
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