{reviewid: 2756264, reviewer: 'Hannah'}
4th December 2012:
LAMAR?? Hold on, LAMAR?!?!?!!?!?!? No, just no. Bilius. Not Lamar. I can take any other name BUT Lamar. You could have at LEAST made it a British name!!
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{reviewid: 2747070, reviewer: 'Godric_Gryfinndor_101'}
19th October 2012:
Umm... it's Ronald Billius Weasely, not Ronald Lamar Weasely.
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{reviewid: 1493352, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
wow that was the best fic i ever read you are a great auther and i thank you
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{reviewid: 1493252, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
you did a great job on the letter i dont think you could of done better
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{reviewid: 1493108, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
yay i hope he survives
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{reviewid: 1493051, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
im a little confused cuz i thot harry was suposed to be dead??? but its a great chapter none the less
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{reviewid: 1492729, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
great chap very good etail i love it
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{reviewid: 1491982, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
great chapter as always love it you are a wonderful writer
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{reviewid: 1491969, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
oh my goodness poor harry
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{reviewid: 1491951, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
great chap, cant wiat to continue reading and find out what happend
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{reviewid: 1491936, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
oh i loves it you show the emotions of characters so well
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{reviewid: 1491928, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
i love the way you stay to the basic story line but put in twists, it makes the story interesting
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{reviewid: 1491902, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
again a great chap just a little confusing at the begining but from then on its awesome
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{reviewid: 1491892, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
great even tho its short i still loved it
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{reviewid: 1491880, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
that was the sadest and best thing i ever read i cried and thats saying somthing cuz i dont cry alot you are a very talented auther
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{reviewid: 1491857, reviewer: 'rup4ever'}
2nd July 2007:
aw thats sad but so awsome
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{reviewid: 1137358, reviewer: 'korun'}
15th September 2006:
damn good story, I applaud you.
I especially loved the star wars reference of admiral ackbar.
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{reviewid: 759819, reviewer: 'SilverPhoenix'}
5th November 2005:
BRAVO! BRAVO! Amazing story! Fantastic Finale!
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{reviewid: 754883, reviewer: 'dee'}
1st November 2005:
2 words......................fantastic story..................there is nothing more i can say
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{reviewid: 546127, reviewer: 'Blackwolf%5BKat%20if%20you%20please%5D'}
15th June 2005:
Lovely story, my dear ^^ This is going on my list of favorites. You recieve an O, for Outstanding Literature x)
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{reviewid: 508495, reviewer: 'ladyfish426'}
20th May 2005:
I just completed the first chapter and I have to say...the speeches that everyone gave about Harry were so...inpersoanl. For people who truely loved him, their speeches were somewhat lacking. There was no emotion and definatly no explanation to anything.
It was Seamus who blew up the feather in Harry's first year, not Dean. And when the Grangers were talking...I had no idea what they were on about. Who's Jack? I was really confused.
The word "shocked" was used a little to much, so you may want to crack open a thesaurus and your puncuation could be fixed in places.
Do you have a beta reader? Would you like one, because I love to proof read stories and would be honored to be your beta reader!
I'm sorry if this seems harsh, but I've always been one to point out the grammatical errors in stories that I read.
The story was good, really, but you needed to start the second chapter with a flashback, maybe, to explain what happened. How people died and how people came to be with their respective partners. Was Harry with Hermione? Who's Rons wife? Is it Hermione? I don't know. But, again..I've not read the other chapters, but...I dunno.
I mean...I'm sorry. Please don't be angry. It's a good story, really, just had a hard time keeping my attention!
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{reviewid: 508490, reviewer: 'ladyfish426'}
20th May 2005:
I haven't finished the first chapter yet, although I intend to...but his name is CHARLIE, not Charles. Did they ever refer to him as Charles in the books? No. Why did you call him Charles in the book. For a minute, I thought you were referring to someone else until he started talking about dragons. Did you call Bill, WIlliam?
Might want to see if you can go back and change that...his name is Charlie.
What I've read so far was good though. I'll review again once Ive read more!
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{reviewid: 484172, reviewer: 'tommyisdabomb'}
1st May 2005:
The title doesn't suit what u are saying in this chapter. Learn to make chapter titles that have information about the chapter title.
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{reviewid: 457636, reviewer: 'Sara_sparkle%20%28not%20logged%20in%29'}
12th April 2005:
I have already read your whole story, and i loved it immensly. Well done in such a great read. I loved it and have put it in for the top 10 i hope you get in!
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{reviewid: 393008, reviewer: 'duelingluna'}
28th February 2005:
Hey! Are you still looking for sequel ideas? because I kinda have one for you if you are interested... i dont know if i wanna tell you in this post... and its too bad some loser screwed up the review page for your last chapter... especially since they couldn't even spell the word right... if you are interested... let me know and I will give you some of my ideas. I think your work needs improvement but its good enough to keep going. Especially if you enjoy doing it. Besides, its about you not so much about us, its about writing because its in you, let it out!
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