Wow. That's all that I can really say. WOW. AMAZING story, follows the song perfectly without being word for word. 10/10!!Author's Response: I'm glad you like this so much!! =D Report Review
luved it song matched perfectly and i luv the way it was written!10/10!Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you like it!! Report Review
wow this was absolutely amazing, i loved the insight into hermione it was perfect. please continue with h/hr :) you are an amazing writer i love how the fic portrayed so much emotion and how it really connected to the song
wonderful job!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much!! After I finish some of the other things I have going on, I definitley will =) I have about...five things to finish? heh. four stories and a trilogy. but the trilogy shouldn't take much longer. Report Review
I absoloutely love this song, and the story well...it was amazing!
I'd like to see some more stories from you!
xxLittle_miss_potterAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like it!! and you will =D I plan on writing more soon Report Review
That was BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved it so much, it was just so awesome. keep doing what you love!!!
Tashy=)Author's Response: aww, thankies chica!! I deffinitly plan on keeping up my writing ^_^ Report Review
I love this song too. =D. I finally added it to my ipod the other day. Anyways, I think that you did a fantastic job with this fic. Your descriptions were amazing...I could feel exactly what Hermione was feeling, and it just really made me happy to read a harry potter story with this song.
There was one sentence that bugged me though:
I've become such a klutz anymore -not that anyone I care about has noticed.
I've become such a klutz anymore?- that doesn't make sense. It is I'm not such a klutz anymore?
Anyways, once again this was really good...another song that I would love to see you write? Well, if we are on the subject of Taylor Swift, then how about Cold as You. I love that song too.
Okay, i know that I have already said this many times, but i'll say it once again. Great job.
Author's Response: did I put a question mark there? or -desi's breain has utterly shut down- I'll check and look over it :P I'll probably see it by doing this.
And I'm so glad you like it!!
and I'll look at it =D I'll have to figure what number it is, cause I only have the burned copy of the CD, teehee. Report Review
ok not the bestAuthor's Response: erm...thanks Report Review
This was a very good songfic... I greatly enjoyed it... You are definitely a talented writer... I also have a songfic up, called He Gets That From Me... Though, I'm not sure whether it's any good or not... It is lacking in reviews... Yours is really good though, longer than mine I'm sure, and well detailed...Author's Response: I'm glad you like it =D I'll take a look at yours when I get a chance and I can leave some pointers perhaps?
and I'm really glad you like my writing!! Report Review
great songflic love it i listen to thatsong at least 3 times a day
10/10Author's Response: haha, me too. I'm so glad you like it! Report Review
I really liked this story, I could just imagine Harry and Hermione - that's the mark of a good story.
I really like the song "Your Guardian Angel" by Red Jumpsuit Apparatus... and I'd love it if you could write a story to it. Author's Response: Awwww, I'm glad you liked it so much!!
and OH EM GEE. I will so totally write a story for that. Its like....my favorite song on earth, even before this one. I'm feeling a Ronmione coming on [a ship I've never attempted -gasp-] Report Review
great job! loved the story... keep up the great workAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like it! and I'll try ^_^ Report Review
that was good.
i love that song too :]
i like a lot of the phrases you used... especially, "But I can't provide a spark, though I certainly feel a bonfire every time he comes by."...
keep writing!Author's Response: yay, my first review for this story ^_^ I'm glad you like it and love the song. And thanks! I'm working on chapter two for my other story right now. Report Review
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