very sweet! I love it!Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad. :) Report Review
quite original and touching -2 thumbs upAuthor's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
I'd give this about a 7 out of 10. =]
Remus & Tonks: Love it. I usually imagine Remus dying first, but that's just my opinion and this is your story. I love the concept of their togetherness even in death.
Harry & Ginny: Very sweet. I loved it.
Ron & Hermione: Too mushy for my taste. But it was tolerable.
Good job. I like how you incorporated the songs for each pairing.
TN1~Author's Response: Thanks. Remus & Tonks was a poetic gesture, something I don't do very often (sad stories are hard to write). Harry and Ginny was a joy, and, yes, Ron & Hermione were mushy. Oh well. I had a prolonged fluffy moment, and they were the characters who got the brunt of it. I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for your review! :) Report Review
What a day, indeed! That was beautiful, sad, poignant, and just plain lovely. I loved it. Particularly the Ron & Hermione part!Author's Response: What a lovely compliment. I'm glad you liked the story and thanks for the review! :) Report Review
This is great! I think these are all little moments that we wished had appeared in DH, and here they are for us to read...
The characters where very well-drawn, and each relationship was unique. You gave them spirit, rather than just leave them snogging on the Astronomy Tower/ beside the lake/ in the dormitories as fanfic authors often do. My favourite was probably Remus and Tonks, but they were all amazing!
A little note though: please, please, PLEASE don't let anyone call Hermione "'Mione". That is a strictly fanfic addition to the Harry Potter world. If you think Hermione is too long, just leave it out! After all, the characters don't have to say each other's names every time they speak...(you can probably tell this is an annoying pet peeve of mine...)
Other than that, I cannot give higher praises to this one-shot. It was brilliant. Thumbs up!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Sorry about the 'Mione thing--I think I've read so many fanfics that it's gotten stuck in my head. I wrote these to satisfy my own curiosity about what might've happened in the missing moments--I'm pleased you appreciated it too! Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
Loved it. :)Author's Response: Thanks. :) Report Review
I thought these three "moments" were very well written and realistic, and tied up some loose ends rather nicely. They were sweet and touching, but not too fluffy. Everyone seemed pretty true to their character from the books, and I wish something similar to this had been included between the last chapter and the epilogue of Deathly Hallows. Oh well, I guess that's why we have fan fiction.
I did have one minor question from the Remus/Tonks one/shot. Remus mentioned something about being in the Order for over 30 years? I assumed they couldn't join the Order until they were seventeen and of age. That would make him about forty-eight years old instead of thirty-eight. Just wondered.
Anyway, enjoyed the one-shots very much. Great job! Author's Response: A note about Remus: I was taking poetic liberty there, and assuming that he joined when was younger (not strictly cannon, but oh well). Sorry for the confusion. Thanks so much for the lovely review. :) Report Review
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