Omg it's amazing I felt like crying I really enjoyed this story the end to the chapter is perfect

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Oh my gosh! This story is amazing!!! I'm moving right along!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it :)

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Your story was fantastic... I cried :)
I NEVER cry. You did a wonderful job with emotions

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that I could make you cry (which sounds twisted but you know what I mean).

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Its not fair.Draco should have been alive!
(And to tell u a secret, I cried when Draco died)

Author's Response: To tell you a secret, I still cry when I read that part ;) I'm glad you liked it :)

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An amazing love story! I cried when Draco died, please write another

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I'm thinking about continuing with another story. It's still up in the air though. College and all (grrr).

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I'M CRYIN SO MUCH A-A-AND WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?! WA! HELP ME CALM DOWN! That's better! You should really think of writing as your career cause' you made me weep so much!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! You've literally just made my day :) I'm glad that I was able to make you weep (in the good way I hope. Like the it's so sad but I don't want to stop reading sort of way). I've been thinking of at least finishing my other story on this site and encouragement like yours always helps ^_^

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I suspect a love potion.
I love the story, btw :)

Author's Response: You might be right. I'm very happy you enjoy the story :)

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I'm crying my eyes out. Oh, this chapter is the best chapter in this story.
And by the way, Sophie Malfoy and I shared the same name :P

Author's Response: Mission accomplished ;D Also, not gonna lie. I;m a little bit jealous. Beautiful name :)

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I just found ur story today and absolutely loved it, although was so sad that draco died :-(

Author's Response: I'm very happy that you liked it ^_^

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very good. very sad draco died but the ending was lovely very good hope you write another hermione and draco story :) would love for you to read mine and give me your view its called stand by me.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the ending. I'll read yours next :)

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I can't believe that Draco died! It is a nice story though, you did a good job on it :-3

Author's Response: Thanks you! I'm glad you liked it!

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This stoy just put me to tears when Draco died!! I love the way you made his character, the way everything fit and made sense. It was a very emotionally pulling story. Very touching, amazing job! :')

Author's Response: It had the same effect on me. I was like "No! I don't want him to die! It's just too tragic!" But it had to happen. I'm very happy that you liked Draco's character :)

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Your story is absolutely wonderful. However I find it necessary to tell you Hermione's middle name is Jean.

Author's Response: Right you are. I thought it was Jane for the longest time. Thanks for pointing that out to me. I've sent it in to be fixed :) I'm happy that you liked the story!

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I WAS SO SAD WHEN DRACO DIED I WAS LIKE NO HE PROMISED beautiful story :)

Author's Response: Any time I read my story again, I do the same thing :P

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loved the story, I wish Draco could of lived though, you know, Hermione's powers bringing him back. could you write an alternate ending where Draci lives? Also do you mind if I steal the elemental idea but with a different name? Love to beta anything, love your style, and love your unusual twists in the story.
-Serpentinia Malfoy-

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it ^^ I've been tossing the idea of an alternate ending around in my head for awhile, but it would have to wait until college has calmed down a little 0.0
As for the elemental idea, go for it. It isn't really my idea anyway, but a common mythological one :P
If I start up Vengeance again, I'll let you know and you could maybe beta it for me. That one has a sequel planned, if I ever get the time -.-
Again, I'm glad you liked it ^^

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I LOVED DIS STORY! I just cant b-leev Draco is dead V_V . *sigh*

Great story!

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i loved the story very very very much. it was fantastic. please keep writing more stories just as gripping!!!

Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I'm thrilled that you like it and I'm thinking of continuing with my story Vengeance if I manage to find the time.

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bloody brilliant you had me in tears and fits of laughter! well done

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wow. that was amazing. i never cry and i am bawling my eyes out!!! i think the reason that i am crying is because Draco saved Hermione. if he wouldn't have died, she would have eventually died from the tumor. wow. i loved this story even though i hated the fact that Draco died. :( but all in all, you wrote one of the best stories i have ever read!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you liked it. I was so sad when Draco died too. When I had the realization that Draco was going to die I was like...but...but.I don't wanna :(

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I loved this story , but I cant believe you killed Draco [I love him so much] the way you enhansed his charcter was so romantic . Great story , though somewhat sad how every time things got a little better they then got much worse .
LadyBellaVoldyloo

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I was sad when I killed Draco but I thought it was the best way for the story to end. I don't like sappy, unrealistic stories. They should be tragic :P

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Great, great story. It could very well be the best I've read on here. I do not approve of you killing Draco, though. I almost cried. But great job!

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I realize this is probably already written, but you better not kill Hermione! XD

Also, nice job with the plot. You're doing a fairly good job of preserving the characters as Rowling wrote them, though it's pretty unlikely that her Draco would want to save Hermione the trouble of having to change in a carriage. After trying to decipher another story before this, thank you very much for your largely clean grammatical, spelling, and punctuation styles.

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Draco shouldn't have died, but the ending was absolutely perfect. I'm not going to lie--best way this story could've ended.

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Eh. Stupid twist. I totally saw it coming...Fire is known as the danger element. If Melissa had a different element, it would have been surprising...But fire? Eh. No.

Author's Response: I never actually thought of that =/
The reason why Mel wound up being fire was actually because I can only picture Jake wearing earth toned colours, so I made him earth, and I started out with the idea of Hermione being air, so I didn't want to change that. I was thinking of making Draco fire, though. Now I do kinda wish I had made it more unexpected =/

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That chapter made me so mad. It was awful!!
You can't just kill off the perfect relationship. That's not the way things work...And, if you had to kill it off, why did you pick Pansy? She's such a prick!

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