Reading Reviews for Forbidden Desire
18 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lillian Rose Potter Forbidden Desire

7th August 2009:
I liked this story. It was cute.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Glad you liked it

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Review #2, by Natures Nobility Forbidden Desire

11th April 2009:
I really like it...
Thumbs up from me!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it

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Review #3, by marisalovesharry Forbidden Desire

8th December 2008:
Oh wow.
How cute is that?
looove it

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it

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Review #4, by Ozoh the Wise Forbidden Desire

29th February 2008:
That was sweet. A lot of crying. Slightly depressing but sweet =)

Author's Response: It was meant to be depressing :P

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Review #5, by kittymayhem Forbidden Desire

29th February 2008:
Aww that's so sweet! Really great story and I hope you write many more!

Author's Response: thankyou. you're too sweet :)

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Review #6, by hpffisawesome Forbidden Desire

25th December 2007:
U know...this is almost like Spiderman 2...Lily=Maryjane and James=Parker...well, maybe just Lily and her to-be husband. Maryjane chose not to mary, since she loved Parker. If you ever need to make a different banner, base it on this.
Anyway, I loved this 1. I never payed attention to Lily/James fics, but here I am, reviewing 1 that's at the top! Merry Christmas!!! :D

Author's Response: Merry Past Christmas. Mine finished 7 hrs ago :P I've only ever watched the 1st Spiderman movie, but i know what you mean. but i never thought of it like that ;)

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Review #7, by WannabeWriter Forbidden Desire

10th December 2007:
This was a unique and wonderfully written story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

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Review #8, by hermione jean malfoy Forbidden Desire

23rd November 2007:
well i really liked it but i felt there was something missing like for example when she leaves allan she should have at least some type of talk not just him letting her go that fast. I saw look over ur story a little bit and it will be perfect!

Author's Response: Okay, I'll take a look over it. I'm going to be sending it to my beta once she's done with my other chapters for my story

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Review #9, by coolkitty Forbidden Desire

21st November 2007:
Really good!!! E-mail me with the name of more of your storys to: jjejeje i would love to read them

Author's Response: why don't you just click my Author name, and it'll take you to my stories?

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Review #10, by love _Conquers_ All Forbidden Desire

20th November 2007:
lovely. what what had caused james and lily to not be together anymore? prequal maybe? :D

Author's Response: perhaps i will ^_^

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Review #11, by _ImaGinE_ Forbidden Desire

16th November 2007:
pretty, except it's more of a clip than a fanfic. maybe enlarge it a bit perhaps?

Keep up the goodies!

Author's Response: okay, maybe i'll do that :)

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Review #12, by moony101 Forbidden Desire

14th November 2007:
okay. . . odd idea, but good writing.

Author's Response: thanks, yeah it was a bit odd

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Review #13, by cat92ba Forbidden Desire

13th November 2007:
i like it. There is one similar but i like this one better.

Author's Response: is the other one by phoenix_flames, cause if it is, I'm speechless ^_^ but somehow i think you're thinking of someone else

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Review #14, by prongsie_potter_rulez Forbidden Desire

13th November 2007:
lovely. (: a few spelling errors, and thought most of it was very well described and such, other parts - actions, words - were not as good. try adding more emotion to it?

overall, a beautiful piece about true love ^_^
and sorry it took me so long to review - i had a busy weekend!

Author's Response: thats okay Mary. I'll go through and fix up the errors, and try to add mroe emotion ^_^

That's okay about the wait

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Review #15, by Princess Di Forbidden Desire

11th November 2007:
Cute! But why did Allen give her up so easily, I don't get it! But other than that it was good!

Author's Response: he gave her up because he knew he had no hope of her ever loving him back, so he let her go to someone she loves.

Thanks for the review

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Review #16, by Argetlam Forbidden Desire

10th November 2007:

Author's Response: thanks ^_^

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Review #17, by Larisia Forbidden Desire

10th November 2007:
That was alright. Not the best I've ever read, but pretty good.

Author's Response: thanks. yeah, it's not the best

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Review #18, by hermyemma Forbidden Desire

10th November 2007:
Awww, it was so sweet. I loved it. The last paragraph is just totally

Author's Response: thanks so much. i enjoyed writing this. apart that it got rejected twice because of the talking was hard to read :P

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