This was absolutely beautiful. Honestly, this last chapter did it for me. I cried throughout the beginning, just reading through the anguish of Sirius' death.
Before reading this chapter, I was wondering how Regulus and Sirius would react to each other's presence. I loved how you described their reunitification (if that's even a word). I found myself smiling at the awkward hanshake, thinking how adorable that was, to see the two forgive.
And I was also pleased with how you ended the chapter, with each couple being together in the arms of who they love. It's beautiful and amazing.
Of course, I probably told you in my other review for "Moonlight" how much I adore your talent for writing, but I feel the need to tell it again, I ENVY YOU!
But I'm dissapointed it stops here. I really am. I sorta wanted to read more of it, you know, knowing that Dumbledore is dead, as well as Mad Eye, Snape and Fred. And let's not forget Mr. Moony and his beloved Tonks!
Anyway, this was amazing! 10/10!Author's Response: thank you so much! this story's kind of on hold, so unfortunately it won't be updated for a bit, but i will get back to it once some time's freed up. ;) Report Review
Great chapter! It is a really good chapter and I wonder what is going to happen next. You make it seem real. I can feel all the emotions that are being felt and I even cried. It takes a special author to be able to do that for me.
Thanks, and I cannot wait to read more!
KressieAuthor's Response: yay, thank you so much! this story's on haitus at the moment, but hopefully i'll be able to pick it up soon. ;) Report Review
This is awesome, truly.
One can only dream of an existence after death.Author's Response: indeed :)
thanks so much for your kind review Report Review
Loved it! I thought it was brilliant, and I wonder what's going to happen next...
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
Please please please update soon! Dying... here... Need... more... FAN-FICTION!...Author's Response: lol, well thank you so much for this review! this story actually is kind of on hiatus, but more will come soon. i'm working on the big one, moonlight, right now, but i might add a chapter to this one every time someone in moonlight dies. Report Review
I cant wait till the have all the mauraders together. even for a death story it is quite happy.Author's Response: thank you! and thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!!! I CRIED AT PARTS!! : ) ESPECIALLY WHEN HARRY AND REMUS SEE HIM DIE...: ( CAN YOU TELL US MORE ABOUT PERSOPHONE?? AT FIRST I THOUGHT IT WAS HADES DAUGHTER, BUT HER BEING IN AZKABAN DOESN'T MAKE SENSE. PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!!! AND MOONLIGHT!!! THATS A WONDERFUL STORY ALSO!!! ; )Author's Response: thanks for the awesome review!
and persephone's just a witch, not the actually persephone of greek lore, although her name is an allusion to her, but they're not the same person. Report Review
this is such a good story... update please? :)Author's Response: i will don't worry! i'm kind of stuck on the story right now, but it'll come to me. :) Report Review
You are quite the writer my friendAuthor's Response: thank you. :) Report Review
You are easily my favorite author. Your stories are well thought out and are wonderfully constructed. I have written for years for my own amusement, and finally wrote a book. You should consider doing the same. You are very talented.Author's Response: wow, thanks. :) Report Review
Please write another chapter, i think this story is adorable :) xx
I love all your stories so much!
keep writing and please update soon! xAuthor's Response: thank you! :)
i\\\'ll try to update in the near forseeable future, i promise! ;P Report Review
Please update soon!!! It's been too long without a chapter on this story.Author's Response: i will, i'll try. i've kind of got writer's block on this one. to use Harry's word, i'm waiting for a "brainwave" although in this case i actually AM waiting for one and not just saying that to get Hermione off of my back about getting a memory from Professor Slughorn Report Review
It's absolutely ADORABLE! Please continue!!!Author's Response: thank you! i will, i promise. ;D Report Review
*wipes multiple tears from eyes* beautiful, beautiful! great job, THE WHOLE STORY IS GREAT! this made my cry heaps especially with James yelling out to Sirius when Sirius was at there damaged house i literally burst into tears...
luv Ava 10/10Author's Response: aw, thanks! :) Report Review
great chapter! i can't wait to read more!!Author's Response: thanks! ;) Report Review
ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE ?!
ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE ?!
ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE ?!
? WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE ?
(Falls out of chair, hand cramping, brain spazzing .)
P.S please update soonAuthor's Response: yes! yes! yes! i will try to update soon! i re e e e e a a a a a a ally really will try!
patience is a virtue, you know. ;) Report Review
AHH. that was really good! i kinda sorta want more. so... yeah. keep it up please. oh and also your moonlight story. that one was my first favorite. = )Author's Response: thanks! *blushes* :) Report Review
I loved it..it was amazing!!Author's Response: thank you! :) Report Review
Aw, that was great! Please keep writing!Author's Response: thank you! will try to update soon!
:D Report Review
Loved it, Absoultey wonderfulAuthor's Response: thanks! :) Report Review
This is very interesting.
This is a cool view on the afterlife.
Its refreshing to read a story about the afterlife where the dead cannot see what goes on in the living world.
Update soon!Author's Response: thank you
i thought it was a good way to give closure to anyone who needed it, myself included
will try to update soon! ^_^ Report Review
Oh my what a wonderful story!!!
As sad as I am that Sirius died, I can't WAIT for Aurelia and Sirius's reunion, as well as his and Regulus's reunion also!
That will probably be the one to make me cry because I've come close to it in all four chapters!!!
This is a great storyline and I can't wait to read more!!!
It is so very intriguing.
And also incredibly original, I've yet to come across a story on hpff like it!!!
Till next chapter!!!
:)Author's Response: thank you very much! and thanks for the 10/10! :)
the chapter on Sirius' reunion with Aurelia will actually be a bit delayed, because I'm currently starting to outline their relationship in life in my other story, Moonlight, and then of course I'm planning companion fic to that point in Moonlight for a more in-depth story of their relationship in life called Aurelia (which has not been posted yet, because I have not yet begun it) but anyhow, kind of wanted to get that out first before posting their reunion in THIS story, because then I feel like it'd be happier to see the happy ending AFTER they've already seen the painful separation. but, not to worry, it will definitely be a chapter worth waiting for! Report Review
Oh. My. Gosh. So I can't remember which chapter, but when you wrote about that library that was like a world big is like my dream library. I love this story. Your writing is just amazing!
10/10Author's Response: thank you!! :)
yes, that would my dream library too! Report Review
This is so grand! Spectacular writing!
10/10Author's Response: thank you!! :) Report Review
Oh, this is so good! It is so different and great. Your writing has such vibe!
10/10Author's Response: thank you, thank you! glad you like it! :) Report Review
Oh. My. Gosh. This is so good! You write extremely well! This story is so different and interesting! I love it!Author's Response: thank you! there'll be more fairly soon, but while you're waiting you can look into a couple of my other stories. i don't know if you know about them...
ta! :) Report Review
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