Enjoyed the story so far. Keep going

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Quite well written. A few typos here and there, but nothing major.

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So far so good! I look forward to continuing to read this!

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Jealousy is in the air.

Wow poor James is so upset, he really wants to be the only one for Lily (I like the way you portrayed that) and I can practically see the envy.

Aw. He was so excited about going to Hogsmead too!

I hope he cheers up...or maybe Sirius will hex Snape for him! (not that Snape deserves it he did help Lily)

Waiting to see what you do next with this, as usual this story gets me excited and is one of my favourites...

Keep up your good work ;)

Niki

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great story sofar. Yea for James/Lily. Update soon.

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James and Lily? Cool, I mean I'd like to see how things work out with Snape and everything - he's going to be disappointed at the least really.

Mauraders though, you gotta love them, escaping trouble only by causing more mischief and still having time to admire their own handywork!

Well I can't wait to see the next chapter, sorry if this review is late or anything but I do really like this story and I'm interested to see what happens next!

Keep going, this story rules!

;) Niki

Author's Response: Well, there is a lot more to come. Don't worry. The story might have more drama than Degrassi, lol. Thanks for the review next chapter should be up next week.

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I really like it! A lot! Please, keep going!

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i think its really good. please write more soon.

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That was adorable. I loved it so much. Maybe he should run to his room and do a air guitar solo!!

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Well atleast Snape's happier now...though they were both lying a bit ween't they? Lily was like, oh I might be friends with James and Snape was like, I'm not in with the deatheaters (*cough*)...yeah, I do wonder how long that will last...

Thanks for another good chapter - we didn't see much of James but it mainly about the Lily/Snape situation (I wonder when Lily and James might get together?) anyway you write really well!

:) Niki

Author's Response: Thanks. Struggling with some block so I feel as though the chapter wasn't quite up to par. But thanks

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Personally, although I like Snape I think that he deserves to be sitting alone after everything he's done to Lily and after James saved his life and yet he was still jealous of James and then he - *breathes in and stops rant* yeah...

Really good chapter, TREACLE TART * licks lips*, yeah...erm sorry about that!

It was just like Dumbledore to say all those random words before dismissing them * wipes away tear* I miss that guy...

Hehe, James & Lily really starting to develop, I wonder when she will find out the "Moony" secret...

Apologise again for lack of reviews, technically you can't force people to review *sighs* but that doesn't mean you're not appreciated! :)

Thanks for everything! XxNikixX

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Yeah, I've been reading this story for ages but realised that I hadn't reviewed as much as I should have, knowing how much I like reviews I decided you would like some more too!

This story is really good, I love the way that it captures everything; The Mauraders cheekiness, Lilys nice personality and Severeus vs. James as sharp as ever!

Sorry that you don't have more reviews, according to my story approximately 1 in 20 people bother to review for everything they read. Sad isn't it?

I think this story has great potential though - its in my favourites!

Thanks for updating :) XxNikixX

Author's Response: Thanks for the favorite! I try really hard to capture the characters. I really worried that I made Lily too sad and such about Snape. But I'm glad you like it!

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Please keep writing, I love this story! You are very talented. Would like to here a bit more about Severus though. :) Good luck!

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Hello, although i only just found it today, - this story rules!

i'm a big fan of both Snape/Lily as well as Lily/James, so i like all aspects of this story and would interested to see where it leads to in the future!

i've recently started my own story and i'm suprised at the apparent lack of reviews you have for such good writing! Aslong as you keep writing then i'll keep reviewing!

You write really well, i LOVE the idea of the clock that shows the time and how puntual people are - the descriptions of the head boy and girls room sounds amazing!

You have all of the characters figured out and this is such a good fanfic its almost like this was stuff that J.KRowlinh wrote but was never published, previous to the Harry Potter books.

Keep up with this story you have obivous talent for writing!

XxNikixX

Author's Response: Oh my god! Thank you so much for that excellent review. It was the greatest compliment ever. I am so editing my next chapter now.

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I love this story so please keep posting so I can keep reading and reviewing. I know how you feel, not many review my stories either. I love this one though!!

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keep posting, your story is good!!

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i like the story.keep writing.

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That was so sad!!! Ohh, please update son!

Author's Response: lol it'l get better soon. lol. And then sad again...and then happy again. Teehee you signed up for a rollercoaster fic. ^-^

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LOVED IT

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Okay, I think your story is really good. I really like it and can't wait for the next chapter so hurry up.lol Great stuff!

Author's Response: lol, Thanks so much. I will update soon.

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I liked it but felt so bad for Lily. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Yeah, I want to make it very emotional so that you can really feel Lily.

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I like it so far. A solid foundation. Nice job!

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