I don't quite know what you're trying to do, but I don't like it. Ginny would never fall into an abusive relationship, and Why is Draco obsessed with Harry? Why did he kill Ron? Why is he abusive and manipulative? Everyone knows that Draco isn't really evil, he was just scared, he didn't like doing all the things he did, maybe he was rude to the golden trio, but he only did that because he was jealous of Harry, he didn't want to admit that he had a crush on Hermione, and he was too proud to like Ron. He was messed up with a miserable upbringing, he wasn't really that bad, all of this is facts! Report Review
The poem at the beginning would be better if rather than repeating 'it's not so bad' if you added another line 'it's not so bad at all' and it would rhyme again, just a suggestion Report Review
update soon can't wait for more chapters Report Review
Keep writing I want to read more, this is twisted. Report Review
update soon can't wait for the next chapter Report Review
update soon i really like this story keep up the good workAuthor's Response: thanks, i update as soon as possible but recently i've been really busy. I havnt finished it yet but i know what i'm gonna write =] Report Review
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