{reviewid: 2443750, reviewer: 'xMsFiggx'}
1st December 2010:
I love this. Incredibly sweet and charming!
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{reviewid: 2439383, reviewer: 'magiccarpet'}
23rd November 2010:
I love all of your stories.
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{reviewid: 2376681, reviewer: 'RupertsPheonix'}
11th July 2010:
I absolutely love the playful moment when Ron says he's never letting her go, that he'll have to carry her around all the time. Really shows that despite how much they've had to mature, they're still able to have fun together.
Love, love, love this oneshot! Great job!
--Kate/RP
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{reviewid: 2297101, reviewer: 'Darque%20Myth'}
10th February 2010:
I love all the little extra chapters you write, tying up all the loose ends that you'd never know were untied!
Funny note:
The very last line that says "...giving her hand a quick squeeze..."
I read it too quickly and at first read it as "...giving her hand a quick SNEEZE..."
(Just thought you might be amused by that-- I know I was!)
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{reviewid: 2110050, reviewer: 'AzkabansMostWanted'}
3rd May 2009:
Awh, I love your writing. I always have. Good job!♥AMW
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{reviewid: 2073683, reviewer: 'Sketch'}
12th March 2009:
Awsome :) I really liked it. not overly dramatic, but simple and realistic as a moment in Harry Potter could be
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{reviewid: 1818251, reviewer: 'mommcgonagall'}
4th February 2008:
This was just lovely~so heartfelt and, well, you know...
It's ron and hermione--what's not to love!
You should keep going with it, you write beautifully!
Weasley is STILL our king!
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{reviewid: 1753400, reviewer: 'JLHufflepuff'}
15th December 2007:
Awww... this is also an awesome little Romione going on. It's very deep and moving. I like their interactions and think they would be quite realistic.
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{reviewid: 1724982, reviewer: 'XxescapingfatexX'}
24th November 2007:
great story! :D
10/10
-Shannon
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{reviewid: 1709969, reviewer: 'xXmalfoysgirl4everXx'}
13th November 2007:
i like this story =]
are you continuing it?
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{reviewid: 1707643, reviewer: 'netballpro13'}
11th November 2007:
awww nice story i really enjoyed it Well Done!
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{reviewid: 1696860, reviewer: 'amritab529'}
3rd November 2007:
aw that was cute.
great job. i loved it.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1689122, reviewer: 'pens82'}
28th October 2007:
good
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{reviewid: 1687884, reviewer: 'hogwarts_girl'}
28th October 2007:
This was great!
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{reviewid: 1679404, reviewer: 'Hermy%20Wazlib'}
21st October 2007:
Very cute...you should write a sequel of their trip to Australia to find Hermione's parents.
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{reviewid: 1679282, reviewer: 'hermiones_patronus'}
21st October 2007:
AW! This was so adorable. Loved it. :)
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{reviewid: 1679206, reviewer: 'ginwannabe'}
21st October 2007:
That was quite nice.
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{reviewid: 1679203, reviewer: 'Green%20Sky'}
21st October 2007:
:)
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{reviewid: 1678526, reviewer: 'crazygurl17'}
21st October 2007:
aww its a cute story
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{reviewid: 1678367, reviewer: 'Ron_Hermione_Forever_246'}
21st October 2007:
OMG I loved it!!! I thought it was so cute how Ron circled all the hotels! That's something I could definitely see Ron doing. I really enjoyed it - thank you so much.
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{reviewid: 1678363, reviewer: 'AussieAnatomy627'}
21st October 2007:
That was really cute!
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{reviewid: 1678324, reviewer: 'fire_diamond'}
21st October 2007:
Aw.so cute!
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{reviewid: 1678283, reviewer: 'ravenclaw_girl308'}
21st October 2007:
this is so sweet. it made me smile. I love the way you put the fact Ron wanted more than just a fake teenage relationship, that he wanted a real adult one.
one thing I noticed though, the line: "running her fingers over Ron's hip in a circular motion, which was exposed through his old small pyjama top." you should put the part about his old pj's after hip instead of motion, it would make more sense that way because it sounds like the motion was exposed though his pj's not his hip. I had to read this line twice because it was a bit confusing.
other than that small thing I love it, 10/10
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{reviewid: 1678225, reviewer: 'Guest%20on%20hpff'}
21st October 2007:
lovely
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