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Review #1, by purewings

23rd November 2007:

Hi, you have asked for a review on my review thread. So here I am. First of all I'd like to say I liked the athmosphere of your story. It's a depiction of an emotion as the title says. You did it well. For a story I think it's too short and to tell you the truth I miss some plot or something besides the emotion. But if you simply wanted to make us feel bittersweet that's okay as well. wings

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I was going for pure emotional atmosphere, and apparently I succeeded.

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Review #2, by essenni

Bittersweet

19th November 2007:

Lovely story!

Author's Response: Thank You!

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Review #3, by evans

Bittersweet

25th October 2007:

Nice piece !...

Poor severus…… I wish he could cheer up somehow…

Aww.. he’s so sad.

But great story !

and yea, u could do with the checking grammar stuff etc.

but i liked it !

Author's Response: About the grammar, yeah I know. Thanks for pointing it out though. I love it when people do that.

Thanks for enjoying my story. I've always seen Severus as a sad character, but I think he's cheered up now.

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Review #4, by Lucawindmover

Bittersweet

21st October 2007:

This was very pretty. There were quite a few errors including typos, grammar, and usage. You might want to go back, line by line, and see what you can find. Good idea though. Good song choice.

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much for your compliments and for pointing out my boo-boos LoL! :D

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