omg wow!
i love the concept, i think it's pretty original
and starting at the end is a brilliant ploy, i really want to know what happened before!
your paraphrasing and language is effective as well,
bravo!
please upload more soon!!!
xx

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WRITE MORE! I LOVE IT! :)

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god that's good! keep writing more! i need to know what happens!

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omg, I read that really fast and didin't even want to read it at first because the it made me think that I was going to cry alot during this story (the summary and banner told me this) but the summary and banner were so hooking that I had to try it and I am now hooked (and after only one chapter, too) I love it and am adding it to my favorites. can't wait the next update! 10/10

Author's Response: Well, if I write the way I plan to, it should make you cry a bit. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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Um, wow. That was- here it comes- totally awesome! Sort of short, but first chapters are often like that. And, as you mentioned, it's only a piece of the ending. I don't think it needs retouching at all. ^^

This shall go on my favorites, because it's an intruiging type of story that I've never quite heard of- Ron being blamed for the death of Harry?! Verrry different.

G'job, and can't wait for the next one.

~Trixiebell

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! Expect more soon!

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well, you've got me hooked! putting it on my favorites so I remember to come back to read it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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