Great start . It comes out just a bit confusing . The flashbacks don't really bend into the story , but the plotline that starts to come out seams promising . You should continue. I'm sure that if you would have a banner , readers wouldn't pass by it . I could make you one . If interested , contatc me on Y!M , my ID is annutza_rock . Hugs , AnneAuthor's Response: Sorry for taking two years to respond (that looks so daft written down!), and thank you for the review and the offer :) Having just returned to HPFF, older and wiser, I'm going to look at this story again, rewrite what I've done and continue writing the whole thing. I'm glad you like it! Report Review
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