Oh, how cute. I think this was brilliant. Little typos, like me instead of my. Stuff like that. But great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, typos are the death of me. haha. Thanks for reviewing.

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just perfect.

your writing meshes with what j.k. has written beautifully, and i could really picture this actually happening to ron and hermione [in a fictional world, of course lol]

fabulous job, truely.

Author's Response: haha, thank you. :)
I'm thrilled that you liked it.

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Great story, I liked the thoughts they had about each other hehe good job :)

Author's Response: haha. Yeah, writing those was fun. Thanks for reviewing. :)

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This was really well written, you did a wonderful job! I liked how you took the Deathly Hallows a little bit further. It was great! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. :)

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Very sweet! I loved how you had the two interacting, and how Hermione's experience with the cup was similar to Ron's with the locket.
Great job!

Author's Response: I wanted to make the two similiar because, in my mind at least, it shows how much they really do love each other. Glad to know that you liked it*smiles proudly* I love to hear that I've done a great job.

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aww, so cute!
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad that you liked it. :)

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awesome loved it well done i do love your stories they are so well written keep it up!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. That was extremely nice of you to say. Thank you for reviewing. This is deffinately one of my favorite reviews ever. Thanks a million.

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is this the deleted scene when Ron and Hermione go & get the fangs & then they kiss?? i like the revision =]
10/10

Author's Response: That was basically what I was going for. haha. Glad that you like it. 10/10? Wow, thank you.

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Fantastic! Very very good!

sweetys (:


Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)

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Wow...I really enjoyed reading the story! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Oh I intend to keep on writing. :)

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Well done. I liked the little insight to the Chamber of Secrets. It seemed to go back and forth between staying within the story and leaving it, which got a little distracting, but overall I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the way I did the Chamber of Secrets. That part was actually quite hard. I watched the second movie several times to try and get the feel of it and reread any chapters in the books that contained the Chamber. I went back and forth? Hmm...I'll have to go and look at that. Thanks for telling or else I probably would not have noticed.

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I liked this story. Only possible critisism that i can rack my brains for is the lack of fluff which all stories need a little of. other than that it was great and kept boredom at bay for 15 minutes.

amy
xxx

Author's Response: Hmm...I'm going to go back and edit this story so maybe I can add in some additional fluff. Although I'm somewhat border line on it because this was supposed to be more of a darker story. But hey, fluff is all ways nice. Thanks for reviewing.

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AMAZING!!! That is the only word that I can use to describe thist story. I loved it, yet another brilliant job.

Author's Response: Wow, um...thank you. That is one of the sweetest reviews I ever recieved. Well in general you always give me so many amazing reviews. Thank you so, so much for reviewing. Glad that you liked it.

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