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Review #1, by snapeangel Visitor

29th May 2009:
really good start on the story, in chapter 1 you have a few type-o's, I didn't notice in this one
Ilove how 'dumb struck' Sev was with her being there / confession and all that..too much..can't wait for more

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Review #2, by nealey Head Girl

26th January 2008:
scary...way scary.way way way scary...way.

Author's Response: lol. i am having trouble with the next chapter sorry it is taking so long.

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Review #3, by Snapegirl Head Girl

19th October 2007:
This is an excellent first chapter. I like you doing this from Sev's viewpoint, it's an interesting twist on things. And putting Dumbledore in as the Transfiguration professor instead of the Headmaster is neat too. So, what's the plan? Is it nasty? Probably is, considering it's Lucius' idea!

Great beginning, will read more!
10/10
If you want you can check out some of my fics too!

Author's Response: thanks. the plan... well you'll find out. sorry about typos but i wanted to get the first chapter up quick.

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