It was very sweet. I love Sirius. 10/10

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Awww how fluffy! ^^ I loved it ^^ 'He kicked off his shoes eagerly and walked into the kitchen totally oblivious to the mess and the dirty lump on the floor that was called Anna.' - this line was so funny. x] As was this: "Oh my god it is!" haha, it's just like the most natural reaction, I could totally imagine her tone of voice and face expression. :) There's only a few capital letters that were missing or out of place that you could fix, nothing major or distracting though, and other than that, this was a really cute story :)

Author's Response: aw thanks! It was my very first story. Glad you like it:). I'll fix the things you mentioned. Thanks again.:D

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Hahahah! Nice!
Fluffy and cutesy! AND sarcastic! I like it. :D
Keep it up!

~ Jane

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like it.
Anna

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this story was very good, you know

Author's Response: Thanks :)

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its cool i like alot

Author's Response: Thanks! glad you like it! i wasnt sure how it would turn out. :)

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Wow, really short, but really good. At first I was a little scared about where this might go, but it turned out great!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :). I know its short but it was only my second story. I promise my stories will get longer. Glad you liked it

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I liked it, I really did, but I agree that you should work on the grammar. But it was very cute and sweet; so fluffy =) You should write more of it.

Author's Response: ok thatns :) I'm going to finish "it can never be the same" then i'll go back and correct it. glad you liked it :D

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Well... It's good but you might want to go over it again and check for grammatical errors, but otherwise it was good... Very cute and fluffy
7/10
If you corrected it I'd give it 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks yeah i'll do that! i didn't think it was that good but thanks again:)

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ok i know it seems im reviewing to myself but i just want to say PLEASE REVIEW I'VE SPENT ALL DAY DOING THESE PLEASE!

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