It was very sweet. I love Sirius. 10/10 Report Review
Awww how fluffy! ^^ I loved it ^^ 'He kicked off his shoes eagerly and walked into the kitchen totally oblivious to the mess and the dirty lump on the floor that was called Anna.' - this line was so funny. x] As was this: "Oh my god it is!" haha, it's just like the most natural reaction, I could totally imagine her tone of voice and face expression. :) There's only a few capital letters that were missing or out of place that you could fix, nothing major or distracting though, and other than that, this was a really cute story :)Author's Response: aw thanks! It was my very first story. Glad you like it:). I'll fix the things you mentioned. Thanks again.:D Report Review
Fluffy and cutesy! AND sarcastic! I like it. :D
Keep it up!
~ JaneAuthor's Response: Thanks. Glad you like it.
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this story was very good, you knowAuthor's Response: Thanks :) Report Review
its cool i like alotAuthor's Response: Thanks! glad you like it! i wasnt sure how it would turn out. :) Report Review
Wow, really short, but really good. At first I was a little scared about where this might go, but it turned out great! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :). I know its short but it was only my second story. I promise my stories will get longer. Glad you liked it Report Review
I liked it, I really did, but I agree that you should work on the grammar. But it was very cute and sweet; so fluffy =) You should write more of it. Author's Response: ok thatns :) I'm going to finish "it can never be the same" then i'll go back and correct it. glad you liked it :D Report Review
Well... It's good but you might want to go over it again and check for grammatical errors, but otherwise it was good... Very cute and fluffy
If you corrected it I'd give it 10/10Author's Response: Thanks yeah i'll do that! i didn't think it was that good but thanks again:) Report Review
ok i know it seems im reviewing to myself but i just want to say PLEASE REVIEW I'VE SPENT ALL DAY DOING THESE PLEASE! Report Review
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