this was REALLY good.
i'd appreciate it if you'd check mine out. thanks!
update soon please.Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I did read your story and it's pretty good so far. Sadly, this is only a one-shot, so no update will be coming. But check out my other stuff, if you want. :) Thanks again. Report Review
Aww... that's so sad.. you actaully feel bad for Pansy...
~Moondanser~Author's Response: Thanks, Moondanser. Yeah, I wanted to put another spin on Pansy and have people want to care about her. :) I'm glad you liked it!! Report Review
that was well written. a good story. keep up the great work.Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I hope to start writing the next chapter soon!! :) Report Review
this is the first story that i have read that Pansy has a heart. i like it. i think that this was really nice, yet very sad.Author's Response: Aww thanks :) Yeah, she's always written as mean and "flirty", which yes, does make it easy to write about, but I kind of wanted to change it up a bit. Thanks for the review, perfect darkness. Report Review
I do like this side of Pansy, even though I also like her as the mean one of the story. Great story and point of view. I also like how Draco is not so heartless toward her feelings and lets her go, because some just don't care.Author's Response: Yep. And that's how I wanted to portray them both! :) But, you're right... I like her as the mean one of the story... better writing material that way! :) Report Review
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