It's a great idea. It just needs to be longer. Report Review
omg i luv it awzum writing will be chcking some more of your stories right now!! Report Review
I think this is a great job for a first. The story is cute and they are all in good character. You write well. Keep it up! Report Review
this story is so far really good! I love it. I made you a banner too. e-mail me at firstname.lastname@example.org Report Review
it's mudblood, not moodblood...
7/10 for that, but otherwise ok Report Review
Great! I really liked this. Keep on writing...
slytherin_goddess_24 Report Review
Interesting approch. It is well written - good grammar and such. I think that Ron's rxn was a bit much and I'm not sure that Malfoy would have actually signed his name to such a thing, although the point obviously was to get to her. I think it could have been done and gotten a rxn out of Ron (and hermione) without the signature. If you take out the original Draco's perspective stuff and then don't sign the card, it make s it a more dramatic and suspensful story that still maintains a fairly high level of drama. Report Review
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