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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by mindifislytherintom The Prank

1st June 2011:
It's a great idea. It just needs to be longer.

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Review #2, by wiccanwitch The Prank

2nd June 2008:
omg i luv it awzum writing will be chcking some more of your stories right now!!

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Review #3, by celestlyn The Prank

22nd November 2007:
I think this is a great job for a first. The story is cute and they are all in good character. You write well. Keep it up!

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Review #4, by Agent Spaztic Stagerus The Prank

5th November 2007:
this story is so far really good! I love it. I made you a banner too. e-mail me at xxlovatoislovexx@yahoo.com

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Review #5, by kissedbyavampire The Prank

30th October 2007:
it's mudblood, not moodblood...

7/10 for that, but otherwise ok

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Review #6, by slytherin_goddess_24 The Prank

22nd October 2007:
Great! I really liked this. Keep on writing...

slytherin_goddess_24

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Review #7, by Twippy The Prank

17th October 2007:
Interesting approch. It is well written - good grammar and such. I think that Ron's rxn was a bit much and I'm not sure that Malfoy would have actually signed his name to such a thing, although the point obviously was to get to her. I think it could have been done and gotten a rxn out of Ron (and hermione) without the signature. If you take out the original Draco's perspective stuff and then don't sign the card, it make s it a more dramatic and suspensful story that still maintains a fairly high level of drama.

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