im sorry to say this but the ending ruined the story. changing the timeline is the same as ending with it was all a dream. the story was good until that point. though not as good as the other harry/hermione fics by the author of the prequel to this story.

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This is an interesting start...

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This was starting to get a little wierd for me. All in all though I liked it. It seems to mostly be more in line with how I would have liked the story to proceed. Thanks for the entertainment. I give the whole story a 10.

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I really enjoyed these two stories. They were very exciting. At fist I was very disappointed about Harry and Hermione were killed. But since they were brought back I was glad. Thanks.

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great story i love the part of you chager the timeline who you make more story like that. 10/10

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i loved both stories! You are a great author

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love it so far the last story was awesome too!

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awsome story. thats 'bout all i can think of right 'bout now so thats all im gonna say. this made the perfect sequel to your other one... reviewed that one ages ago... keep it up ay?

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Weird but good story. Some parts were a bit confusing but overall it was quite enjoyable. 9/10.

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This story is AWESOME, it is just so unique, I've never read a HP fanfic quite like this. 10/10.

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I have to compliment you on this storyline. It is very unique and it is interesting to the reader, trying to decide if what Heinzl is doing is right or wrong - he has a good principle but should he be killing people??

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In all of your stories so far I don't think I've seen Ron put in a good way at all - don't you like him at all??? He is my least favorite of the trio but for him to act like he is - is almost out of character. He was going to hit that poor owl. Anyway, I have enjoyed this story so far, It's nice to read something completely original.

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Well, thats something a little different - someone going after the purebloods, not the muggleborns.

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all around, i was quite intrigued by ur story. well written.

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why kill neville, ginny, and annabelle? and i thought her name was annabeth?

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ok nice chapter ending. but one question. didnt lavender brown die along with dean at the hands of draco and pansy?

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seriously? no ,really? i hope u have a good reason for doing this.

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really nice chapter. eager to figure out the twists in the plot

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wow. cant believe u killed ur own daughter's namesake. and dumbledore is dead, whoa. by the way tho, a spell by the name of lazerous , shouldnt it serve to reawaken the dead? but we know thats not possible in the HP world.

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"alleged" hope things get better for the muggleborns soon

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its brave of u to write about something which has caused u much pain. thank for a well thought out chapter.

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ok what's with the rampant bloodshed. the tonks'? why?

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wat on earth is going on here? im utterly confused, but utterly fascinated.

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u've got to be kidding me. u killed dean and lavender? y? im getting tired of draco and his crap aka pansy.

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hmmm. i dont like that the imperious was cast on justin and hannah, and am sorry that justin's arm was blown off. hope it can b repaired. so lucius is out, this should be interesting. what kind of archaic laws are these? lol. lovely plot however.

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