Ok this story was ok. I personally didn't like how Harry was an alcoholic and that hermionie ended up with another man but you still did an amazing job if you like that kind of stories. Well I hope that you just have fun writing these fan fics. I always wanted to read more stories where Harry and Hermionie were together and thugs got serious but to where you dont have to be 17 to read it Report Review
My God that was AMAZING!!! It was so sad. Poor Hermione and Harry! :'( It's not like he meant to do it!
Great story! It rocked!Author's Response: Thanx, glad u liked it Report Review
Not bad! It could use editing, but it wasn't bad.Author's Response: Thanx for the review i'll take it on board Report Review
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