awww it is so cut I absolutly love it!!!

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Lovely story :) I really enjoyed reading it & I love the song, too. Well done ^^

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Aw... that was cute! I loved the ending.

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It was fluffy,really fluffy, but I liked it. But, I couldn't help but love Danielle. She seemed so nice. And I know where Natalie's coming from. Sometimes I feel like the supposed "Girl Next Door." I think everyone does at a time. Well, this was great. It would be great if you made more like this!

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Nice, well done, a bit fluffy but since that's what you're going for, go for it! The main thing I would suggest to improve it would be to make it a bit more clear that Sirius has never kissed her before or said I love you to her. Maybe mention something about how 'I know he dreams about kissing her when he can't even stand the thought of letting me kiss him' or 'he probably doesn't even care about me that much. I bet I'm just a rebound for when she rejected him. He hasn't even told me how he feels yet!' or even just mention at the end when Sirius actually is confessing mention it there. Just a suggestion and not even one that is neccessarily needed. I'm just trying to find something for you to improve upon because I know we all can and I'm pretty sure you'd like a bit of CC every now and again. Lovely though! 9/10 (didn't 'pop' enough to deserve all ten points, but I'm stingy, sorry lol)

Author's Response: Yay! I've never got CC before, and I really would love to get some. Thank you so much for that! ^_^ I will take on your advice, and probably edit my story one day - when I can bring myself to read it all over again xD I generally hate my own stuff, so there. Thanks again, and I'm happy to get a cool 9 :)

- Lily xxx

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Adorable! I loved this chapter so much. It's great! Good job, keep up the awes. work!

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- Lily xxx

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ROFL! I LOVE the way you changed the lyrics! Classic. Wonderful story! 10/10

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- Lily xxx

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That was so cute! Top-notch fluff, if that's the way you want to classify it. I love Sirius!

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- Lily xxx

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I adore the song. I really liked it, you made the words suit the melody. I loved it. x

Author's Response: Thank you, I had to change some of the words, like the 'Miss America'. Please, Miss America? *is American herself* xD

- Lily xxx

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