I love that song, and I love this songfic. It's beyond sweet - it's magical. You're wonderful! Report Review
It was a great story. Very romantic. After I read it , I thought of Lily chucking Malfoy through a window and into the rain . because I had thought of a story where he gave her a letter from her sister Petunia , from Macgonagal , saying her parents died , and Malfoy was mocking her pain because he had read the letter, and LIly threw him out the window into the pouring rain , then ran the oposite way into the rain with James at her heels- that's how she saw a different side to him. It was just a thought. You can write it , if you wanted to. but I did love your story! Report Review
very lovely. it goes well with the song (especially sicne i was listening to it on my iPod while reading, and i was listenign to thte aucustic version, so it was even more pretty.) Report Review
I liked it. : ) I thought the story fit really well with the lyrics. Good job! Report Review
That was very descriptive, very vivid, you were able to evoke a lot of emotion with your words.
The first few lines were very powerful, drawing the reader in, and you were able to keep that up throughout the story. I have to say, though, those first few lines espiecally were just amazing, so deep and vivid.
I don't actually know the song, and I didn't really think it was perfect for the story, but it did add meaning and parts of the lyrics definitely weaved into it well.
All in all, I think you're a great writer and this was a lovely read! Report Review
Awesome, awesome, AWESOME! Report Review
I. Love. That. Song. (I liked your story a lot too. It was bittersweet, and there's a lot of truth in it). Report Review
This is just... wow. You should definitely write more James/Lily stuff! :D Report Review
Pretty GOOD! only james has got hazel eyes...
But still, LOVED IT :DAuthor's Response: thanks :) but see message below regarding james' eyes... Thanks for the R&R, anyways =] Report Review
James' eyes are hazel not blue. Author's Response: Damn, how many people have to tell me abt the goddamned eyes? I mean, I appreciated the reviews that told me about it so I was able to correct the errors, however, may I point out that this section is for REVIEWS, and not PROOFREADING COMMENTS? So if you want to point out an error, PLEASE include at least a sentence abt how you liked (or hated) the story. Report Review
Very nice wording really enjoyed this story good job! 9/10 Report Review
very deep and emotional.
10/10 Report Review
it was really good. seriously that is one of my favorite songs. ur a good writer! Report Review
Hey this one shot is really good. Btw though James' eyes are hazel not blue. write more!! 9/10 Report Review
well first off james dosn't have blue eyes. He has hazel. It was ok though, but i think it went kind of fast. 7 Report Review
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