love this chapter
keep up the good work!!!
x_dodoAuthor's Response: Thanks. You should read my other story to. I will be writing more for this after or during my other story too. Thanks for the positive review. Hope you stick with the story. - Kaite Report Review
Okay, sister mine. Get ready for this. Deep breaths.
First off, do not put the disclaimer. It is not necessary. It's at the bottom of the page.
Secondly, you have some grammar issues. Proofread then have someone else proofread.
Thirdly, nice angstyness (I know, bad spelling there. I was making fun of you). The depressing tone is great there.
8/10Author's Response: whatever dear sister mine. And plus the angstyness was so a 9/10 lol Don't worry I'm going to be redoing this story once I'm done with my other one. No disclaimers at all. Report Review
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