This isn't the sort of story I usually read, in fact I read it because Shyla is the name of my 4 year old sister! But anyway I'm glad I did because it had a good moral, and wasn't all fluff.

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hello again cuz! this was alright i don't like that song by JT though so, but it's okay... lol...

man, i read more of you stories than i though as im typing this im at school on my spare, and i don't have to much tme left so ive been readin oe-shots, but ive read most of you one-shots... LOL... oh well...

~your cousin Ashley

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like the song either, but when inspiration strikes, you gotta write! PX

Most of my stories are short anyways, and I hope you get around to reading some of them. Thanks again for reviewing!

~Katie

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I thought this was excellent. You are such a good writer. Keep writing, please!
xo.
prideandvanity

Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!

~Katie

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wow this is really good
it would be soo cool if there was a kind of fable book like with all these types of stories about how the marauders learnt lessons in life and such it is really cool
definately a 10/10

Author's Response: Hmm, that's a good idea. You should try it! Happy New Year, and thank you for the review and the rating!

~Katie

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that wuz rly good! awesome but if elt rl bad 4 remy but hey
what goes around comes back around

FUN N KISSES

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, I'm glad you felt the emotions of the story, and I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again for reviewing.

~Hermionesclass

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I think it was nice and well written, it was a little fast on the story line, but it worked well.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yeah, it did go a little quickly, but I thought it was ok. Thank you for your feedback!

xo

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This story was very well written, but I have to admit, I'm going to have to find a more cheerful story to read because this one has really depressed me. Which is a credit to you, because you wrote so I would get really into the story, so job well done. I don't really like that song but it was well used in this story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I don't really like the song either, but I was listening to it and inspiration hit! Thanks for reviewing!!

~Hermionesclass

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