awesome work can't wait for your next chapter!! Report Review
That...that, is scary, freaky... I shiver o.o mentally.
GOD writing though :D
10/10 for crepinggg me out :P great storyyy..imm slackk... Report Review
This is such an amazing one shot only problem is, is there actually a part two? don't just leave us readers in suspense telling us it will be up soon!!!
But i really do love it, would be great if part two did appear... Report Review
Omigod! SUCH an amazing story. I can't wait until you update again (which I'm hoping with be very, very soon.) (: Report Review
i really like this story! i really hope you put up the next part soon!!! Report Review
I'm dying for the second part. I think it's killing me. Like a disease. ...Leprosy. It's been so long I've gotten leprosy from the anticipation and now limbs are falling off, like I'm a zombie or something. For the love of all that is good and holy, please put up the second part! Augh! I'm dying over here, dude! Report Review
This is really good! Deliciously creepy! Keep updating please. xxPixie Report Review
First: Thank you so much for taking the time to review one of my one-shots :) Second: This cliffhanger is evil- I need to know what happens! The tone of the scene kept me reading and I can't wait to see what the other parts hold! *favorites*Author's Response: First, oh my goodness, no problem. It was a fantastic one-shot, so I'm glad that I did read it. Secondly, sorry for the cliffhanger, and thank you so much for prompting my muse in the right direction. I know exactly how I'm going to finish this, but up until now I've felt no desire to do so. Thank you so much. X Report Review
Ooooh... more more more please!
its really good... please post more...!!!Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! I'm glad you liked it- part two will be up soon, fingers crossed! Waiting for this validation queue is like murder! X Report Review
*dun dun DUN!!!* wow that was exciting. u make everything so emotional. how do u do it? Report Review
Oh I can't wait!!! He didn't take her, did he? It's great so far. Report Review
I really adored this story-- you should definitely keep it going. It's the most creative thing I've seen written in a long time. Report Review
Awesome, now update before I go psycho. Report Review
You do a good job of implying that the watcher is Scorpius; I do wish you left more hints of who the watcher really is. Good creation of mood. Report Review
This is chilling! I can't wait to read the next part - you've managed to build the tension splendidly - and the structure of it is very nice as well, starting with Albus being distraught, and then going back to seing what happened to make him so..
But yes - eagerly awaiting the next one!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for a great review. I've been requesting reviews for you recently, so it's nice to see an old one which you left of your own accord! Lol! X Report Review
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