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Review #1, by Phoenix_Flames Wake Up Call

17th June 2009:
Hello, dear! I finally got around to your story. Please forgive me for the incredibly long wait.

This was an awfully short beginning, but with what text there was, you seem to have a story full of potential here. It all seems new. you have a brilliant sense of longing and mystery about it. I need to know what's happening and what will happen!

Not only that, but you wrote absolutely beautifully. I can feel the emotion and see the scene right before my eyes. I'm not really a Dramione shipper, but with you, I think I can be. ;)

9/10

Author's Response: No worries darlin, I know how busy everyones been lately. I'm so glad you liked the way I started this story off, and yes, the chapters may seem a bit shorter than expected, but I believe in caarefully laying out a plot and not dumping everything on you at once... I want to do exactly what happened to you.. make the reader want to move on to the next chapter as quickly as possible.. lol
Can't wait to hear what you you think of the rest of the story! ;)
Much Love
~Moon~


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Review #2, by never_too_old Saying Goodbye

23rd January 2008:
Well done, Moondanser. :) I guess I should have expected this ending, seeing as how the title of your story is "When Love Dies." But, there's always that little hope that everything will be okay. Her speech about him was very good. Brought some tears to my eyes.

Again, your story is good, but I would just go back and correct some spelling and grammar errors in your chapters. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading the whole story ( and reviewing each chapter )
Still eagerly awaiting the rest of your story!
Much Love!
~Moondanser~


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Review #3, by never_too_old A Hero's Death

23rd January 2008:
:*( Although this is a VERY sad chapter, the title is perfect. He was most definitely her hero. :)

Author's Response: As horrible as it is.. you know it had to happen....
~M oondanser~


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Review #4, by never_too_old The War Begins

23rd January 2008:
Well, yay that he's not dead (for now, anyway) Poor Seamus. Sad to lose a family member. And now it's time for Harry to live up to the prophecy. I must say.. I'm a little nervous for him.

Author's Response: Yeah, even though it's a Hr/D story... Harry still has his role to fill..
You should be nervous... for all of them..
Onward!
~Moondanser~


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Review #5, by never_too_old Long Days and Endless Nights

23rd January 2008:
And here comes the war. Oh man. I hope Draco escaped somehow. You have me on the edge of my couch, wondering what's about to happen next. Good job, Moondanser! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad it's keeping you interested... beware the next 2 chapters though ....
~Moondanser~


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Review #6, by never_too_old Out of Time

23rd January 2008:
Depression is never fun. I can't believe how long she slept! But, hopefully she has come to accept the fact he's gone. It's sad, though... but life has to keep moving. Good chapter. You have my heart aching for her (actually, them!)

Author's Response: Yeah, time tends to pass quickly when you're in a well of depression... good thing she has such great friends :)
~Moondanser~


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Review #7, by never_too_old Truth and Consequence

23rd January 2008:
Okay, please tell me this story will have a happy ending. What does this mean?! Will she not care? She better not. It's not like he wanted this! Okay... enough of this... I have more reading to do!! :)

You're still doing great. I probably would recommend you rereading this story and correcting some little spelling errors. Other than that, I'm really liking it!

Author's Response: If you're hoping for happily ever after.. you might be alittle disapointed.. :(
I know I have to go back and do some editing... I tend to post in the middle of the night and some errors slip through the cracks.. I'll be revising soon ;)
Carry on!
~Moondanser~


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Review #8, by never_too_old Draco's Return

23rd January 2008:
No... don't break her heart, Draco!! Oh man... I don't think she can take anymore. Stupid Snape... Stupid Lucius... lol Okay.. enough of that. On to the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, neither one of them catch much of a break in this one...
~Moondanser~


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Review #9, by never_too_old Love Notes

23rd January 2008:
Oh wow. I'm a little teary eyed. How cute that he carved their initials in the tree! So.. innocent! :) I can't wait to continue!!

Author's Response: See.. even Draco can be sweet ;)
~Moondanser~


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Review #10, by never_too_old Something's Wrong

23rd January 2008:
Poor Hermione. Heartbreak much? :( And Draco, too. Talk about being torn. I hope they can manage to stay together... somehow!! :)

Author's Response: ... I know... but we'll have to see where the events take them...
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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Review #11, by never_too_old Wake Up Call

23rd January 2008:
Not good! I hope he can convince Snape!! Very good start to the story, Moondanser. Poor Hermione. She will never stop stressing about school until it's over. And even then I'm sure she'll find something else to stress over. :)

Author's Response: Hehe... I had to keep at least that part true to her character ;)
Cheers!
~Moondanser~


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Review #12, by Ashley Love Notes

6th January 2008:
I loved this story exceedingly. It showed that malfoy had loved hermoine a whole lot this story was a great story!

Author's Response: Yup, def a R&J romance ;) ONly this time one gets to live... I'm so glad you enjoyed it and look fwd to your reviews on my other works :)
Cheers!
~Moondanser~


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Review #13, by dogloverluck The War Begins

29th December 2007:
Dear Author,
You have made a common mistake on a name in this story. Seamus Finnegan is the correct spelling not Shamus Finnegan.
thank you for your time.
~Bella

Author's Response: Dear Bella,
Thank you for taking the time to point out my minor mistake rather then leaving a proper review. In the future I suggest you stick to reading professional writing if you are so concerned with perfection.
Once again, thank you for pointing out my error, I will correct it as soon as the queue is reopened. Happy Holidays.
~Moondanser~


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Review #14, by Dracosmybabisdaddi Saying Goodbye

9th December 2007:
omfg..this story made me cry...as im writing dis review im cryin..this story has touched me very much...i love this story its the best i read so far...

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. To tell the truth I cried myself as I wrote parts of it (mostly the last 2 chapters....lol) I hope you continue to read and review my stories, there are a few others posted.... on 2 more on the way ;)
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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Review #15, by gryffindor_princess21 Saying Goodbye

7th December 2007:
got my tissues right here *grabs one and wipes eyes* saying goodbye to Draco must have been hard for Hermione...i'm so sad he had to die. :'(

Author's Response: I know, I was actraully crying as I wrote the last chapter.... but in the end it will make Hermione a stronger person for the battles to come... I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.... and very happy that you left reviews....
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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Review #16, by gryffindor_princess21 A Hero's Death

6th December 2007:
NOOO! :'( Poor Hermione, poor Draco! now they'll never be together!

Author's Response: :( .... i sorry.... one more chapter to go....
Much love
~Moondanser~
ps.. make sure your tissues are ready for the last chapter...


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Review #17, by gryffindor_princess21 Love Notes

5th December 2007:
ohh how sad! :'( i hope they will be back together again soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review..... guess you're going to have to read on to see if they will be reunited... ;)
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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Review #18, by DracoLover92 Truth and Consequence

25th November 2007:
wow you should so carry on writing this story... it nearly made me cry ='[.. lol

Author's Response: Thank you so much. The story is actually complete, and awaiting validation... shouldn't be long now...
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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Review #19, by amrawo Something's Wrong

17th October 2007:
great chapter! loved it! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you... chapter 3 will be posted soon :)
~Moondanser~


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Review #20, by amrawo Wake Up Call

13th October 2007:
love it so far! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, the next chapter will be up as soon as possible!
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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Review #21, by Lilly Barker Wake Up Call

13th October 2007:
OoOooO I need more!!! Ha ha loved it =]
Okay now write fast so i can read more lol =] 10

Author's Response: Thank you so much. The story is actually complted, jsut have to wait through the validation process.. unfortunatly it's going to be a little longer then usual between chapters 1 and 2 because I'm waiting on a song fic to be validated, but the next chapter will be up soon.
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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