Wow, this story is so good! Once I started, I just couldn't stop. I'm sad to hear that it's been "Abandoned". You should finish it and make my day! Please?? :)Author's Response: Sorry Incandescent, but I'm abandoning fan fiction for good. I'm working on my original stories now.
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Abandoned? No! :( That really sucks. I hope you're able to find time again; you're really a fantastic writer, m'dear.
I'm keeping this story in my favorites just in case you pick this story back up again :)
~LAuthor's Response: Thanks so much!! I hope I'm able to pick it up again too.
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This story is amazing,too! Where do you get the ideas?
Actually I'm ashamed I haven't read this earlier...
It's brilliant! :)
Hm.. But where is Hermione.. ?
How do you think of such a amazing characters - Charlie Cale, Rochelle.. ?
I'm definitely gonna read all of your other stories. :)
I hope you'll keep writing this!!!
I'm astonished that there're not to many reviews on some chapters.. They aren't as much as you deserve...
You're my favourite author over here! :)
Soo.. keep this up!Author's Response: Wow thanks so much. Although I will never stop loving this story and of course Rochelle is the closests of my characters to my heart I'm afraid it's been abandoned...for now. I am thinking of re-writing it but really do not have the time =/
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just to let you know you repted the first bit of chapter from the killing curse chapter i love the story! just letting you knowAuthor's Response: I know it's all over the place my computer is being a bit twitchy and likes to mess around with me >.<
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Poor Rochelle! Love it, as usual! Very nicely written. I just saw that you "favorited" my story and started FREAKING OUT! Seriously, I wrote to my friend and started squealing. Awesome chapter, can't wait for more!
Hugs, Gigi (:
Btw, the fourth chapter of Secret Sister is going to be submitted for validation today. (: I've figured out where I'm going with it, which is an important step that should take place BEFORE I come up with a ton of twists and turns. But that's me. ;)Author's Response: Yeah I should really plan Blood to the Bitter End out fully but ah well!
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OH NO!!! IS SHE GOING TO BE OKAY?!! SHE HAS TO BE OKAY!!! Sorry. I'm calm now. But I can tell you one thing - I'm not going to be able to sleep tonight! Too much adrenaline! :)Author's Response: hahahahahahaha! Well in that case I'm going to have to post the new chapter very soon ;D Report Review
hey, loving the story so far. your interpretation of the characters is great. i know there isn't always time but i recommend reading over a couple of times before posting as some things dont make sense eg. "I furiously and kicked the table leg" was a couple of chapters ago and there were a few other bits similar.
keep writitng i can't wait to read more - madmooAuthor's Response: I really should but I have very little time and I just quickly read it and fix up the big mistakes. I know as a writer I should be a bit better...
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Ah the wonders of gillyweed... I absolutely adore your descriptions in this, they are SO cool. What language does Rochelle speak to open the chest? Is it Latin or what?
Lots of drama in this one, it's awesome. As always, I can't wait to read the next chapter - wonderful cliffie by the way!Author's Response: I wish it were Latin (I should really learn that language) but no, its demon.
I thought it was a good cliffie too =D
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It was so funny! A really well written, fluid chapter and a joy to read! (I would never threaten Rochelle!)Author's Response: haha nor would I! And I created her! lol Report Review
Oooh I can't wait to see what happens! And, as always, so many funny little moments in this chapter that got me laughing - great work!Author's Response: Well I do like to put in some funny parts just to balance it out =)
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Gahhh!!! I'm so curious! I wonder what lies ahead? Well, I'll just read the next chapter and find out! :)Author's Response: =D Report Review
Great chapter, as per usual! And I particularly liked thedescriptions of the dresses - I could see them in my mind!Author's Response: I think the dresses are nice, its about the only thing I can design nicely =D
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haha lol poor Scrimgeour... Rochelle can be very scary when she wants to be, can't she? I love the reaction of the secretary, it's hilarious!! It seems like a lot of fuss to go to just for some measly apparition tests... Scrimgeour should lighten up. =DAuthor's Response: Yeah she can be pretty scary lol
If Rochelle had her way she wouldn't have gone for the tests but she didn't want the ministry on her tail
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Ooh it's getting all mysterious and stuff... Wow, Rochelle's a great achiever - stupid drawings and spiky hair? I'm in awe. =D Hah, she got it in the end though - and by the way, that whole riddle thing is VERY cool. Is the Annabelle Courtess an actual ship or did you just invent it? Cause if you made it up, that's pretty awesome...Author's Response: Yeah I made the ship up. I wish it were real...
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Ahhh... being enigmatic now, are we? heh, this is awesome. Is Harry's dream thing a prophecy, or what? It's kinda funny that instead of playing Charades or something they act out defeats of dangerous animals and evil dark lords... still love this story.Author's Response: Yes Harry's dream is very important! hee hee
Thanks for the review! Ah you don't know how much I love you (in a non creepy, stalkerish way heh heh) for reading! Report Review
She was thinking of Harry. It was painful to listen to how her thoughts entwined within each other, swirling, dancing, beating like the heart.
That is SUCH a cool description... dunno why I love that particular one so much, but it's just really cool. In case you need reminding this story is STILL awesome, always has been & always will be, update soon? please?Author's Response: =D Thanks as always!
And I'll update soon because I don't have a new chapter for The Blonde, the Brunette and the Red Head =) Report Review
As always, a fantastic chapter. I am honoured to have had the opportunity to read it, and I really hope you're able to put more up soon!Author's Response: More shall be coming once I get over my sickness =D Report Review
This was HARDLY pathetic, I especially enjoyed all the stuff between Rochelle and Fred, it was so funny! And the dolls' house is a really interesting concept - I'm amazed at how you manage to think up all these cool spells!Author's Response: Awww thanks! You've brightened my day so much! Report Review
OMG, some of the bits in this chapter were SO FUNNY!! I was laughing out loud! I think my family thought I was going crazy, I was just sitting at the computer LAUHGING for so long! Good job!Author's Response: Oh don't worry, my family know I'm crazy.
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Okay, Ijust have to say - this fic has a really cool concept behind it, and it's sooo funny in places, and I really want to find out what happens next! So how can you not like it? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T ABANDON IT. PLEASE!Author's Response: Don't worry I'm not going to abandon it I just don't like it at this time heh heh.
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It's staring to pick up speed...ooh, I can feel the anticipation tingling in my toes! And the curiosity - how did she get her bad leg? Where is it going to go next?Author's Response: Oh yay! Another reviewer!
Yes so many questions, so little answers, you'll just have to keep reading to find out =D Report Review
It's NOT BORING!! I know exactly what you mean, though - I'm writing my first fic at the moment and it's going to take a while to set it up. Personally, I think you're doing a great job, and I can't wait to see what happens next!Author's Response: Aww thanks. Your reviews have really picked me up after half a day at the hospital haha.
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I enjoyed this chapter - especially some of the diologue, which was HILARIOUS in places! I thought it went a bit slower than the last chapter, but it was still really good! :)Author's Response: The first chapter is newer than the others, if that makes sense. I re-wrote the first chapter which means this one is a bit of a drag heh heh
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WOW. I'm breathless - what an explosive start! I admre your ability to be able to jump straight into the tricky stuff. And Rochelle is a verycool character! (so far!)Author's Response: I think she's cool. I've had some people say she's untrustworthy heh heh
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Wow. WOW. She beat Voldemort. That is SO COOL!! I have to say though, it's a bit daft of Ginny to be playing with the Death Eaters dolls house. Didn't she notice that they were like... evil?
Then again, living in the same house as Fred and George, evil dolls probably wouldn't be a very rare occurrence...
As always, a fantastic chapter, and I loved every second of it.Author's Response: phew, I'm so scared of this story, one bad review and I'll snap in half hee hee
Thank you for reviewing, you are truly wonderful! Report Review
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