Reading Reviews for Bittersweet Partings
  
1 Reviews Found
Review #1, by Pretty Purple Pelican Bittersweet Partings
18th January 2008:
He didn't love her anymore, nor had she ever loved him.
^But he says at the end that he DOES love her. I'm confused?

One thing you need to watch is that you use the right words. For example, you say "new" when you should say "knew", and you used the wrong "there/they're/their" a couple of times.

It's a very great and powerful story, but there are just some techincal/grammar things that should be fixed. I really liked that she realized that she didn't love him.

On another note, and I hate doing this, 'cuz I always feel horribly rude, but are you at TDA? I was just wondering where I could find you to possibly have a banner made. *sheepish grin*

Author's Response: oh gosh thank you for pointing those! I didn't see them. I'm elated you think so! i'm there as COLOR!myworld ^_^

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net