okay, 2 years, why no update? because i NEED the next chapter. like no joke. the suspense is killing me! whhhyy? okay, i'm done.
so this story is amazing, and i love how it is written. it is awesomesause. Report Review
Update XD it's really good Report Review
omg, Ollie is so full of it sometimes ;) update soon! Cant wait until next chapter :D Report Review
Love this story,well i'm off to read the next chapter. :) Report Review
Ooh, we get a treat!!! A chapter written from Ollie's POV,yay :D.OMG so he actually DOES like her...oh Joy!!! Aw..he's so cute...all excited abut Quidditch, I just wanna ruffle his hair. Lol...so Harry's not famus, sucks at Quidditch, while Hermione can play any position (dirty!) and Ron can only Keep? Hahahaha... I love alternative Universes *g*. I really do hope that Oliver finds Jackie though and that they make up...
PS: Loved your prank, have to try that on my friends *evilgrin*
Hope you update and my reviews have given you some motivation to write another chapter :D Report Review
I can understand Jackie for wanting to get away from everything and think about her family...but ooh I am starting to think that drinking was a really bad idea..no matter how horrible her father is and what problems she's having. See, what I mean? I just wanted her to get away from that creepy guy so badly!! So thank Merlin for Aberforth... Oh Jackie, you silly silly girl! Hhm..she probably needed to visit the graveyard to face her problems instead of ignoring them... and as for the girl with Oliver...Scottish accent? Couldn't be a relative could it?? Anyway...the next chapter keeps calling me :D Report Review
Oh yes...the typical thinking loudly... (I do that a lot... once I accidentally said out loud "I don't need him, he's an idiot", talking to myself about my exboyfriend who just happened to be walking behind me...classy, right?) Anyway, Oliver's reply was awesome: "It would be what now?" Ooh, but they both seem kind of peeved (is that the right word here?) that they're not sharing the same room anymore . Hahah, so Alicia, Angelina and Katie demand to hear the details... poor Jackie. And the letter from her stepmom and sister were awfully short...that was just lame! And what is the deal with her dad? He seems like a right prick...why can't he deal with stuff like that himself...anyway next chapter here I come :D Report Review
Honestly...are none of their friends able to keep a bloody secret?? Lol, so dear Oliver is too shy for dirty jokes and sexual innuendos in front of his mates but has no trouble uttering afore mentioned things in front of Jackie?? Curious...very curious... Aahh... and there I thought Oliver was having a chance to confess his feelings...but I can't even be mad at their friends, because that was just too hilarious, especially with Tyler rofling all over the place. So glad that Jackie ain't preggers though and now they are "separated" from each other...oooh the suspense...must read more :D Report Review
Aww... evil Tyler gossiping about the kiss *evilgrin* ...and a cold bedroom? Interesting...very interesting... I will not comment on the later happenings because it will definitely be extremely dirty and inappropriate...but 3 times??? Wow!! Mwahaha, caught in the act by Angelina! But... oh no.. stupid silly teenagers!! They should have known better...oh deary... Anyway next chapter is awaiting me so I am off...
PS: Protective older brothers rock, don't they?? Report Review
It's me again :D The nightmare wasn't much fun, but oh how I enjoyed Oliver teasing poor Jackie about what happened. (I have the strange urge to sing "I'm gonna make love to you woman, I'm gonna lay you down by the fire"...ya know like Chef? In South Park?) Anyways... Shame on you Wood!!! That kiss meant something you twat... grr...stupid oblivious boy...someone smack him! OMG I cannot bloody believe that my suspicions about Tyler were spot on!! Yay, me *gg*. I love Tyler though, for being so blunt and asking all the really awkward questions: Next Chapter here I come :))) Report Review
Hey!! Could dear Oliver be jealous of Tyler? Haha, boys and their fantasy games (says the hypocrite who loves to play Lord of the RIngs strategy games...damn me for being a geek). The towel incident was brilliant (you should see the grin plastered on my face right now, I know I have a very dirty mind). And yet another tickle fight... I do have a suspicion about Tyler but I shall just have to wait...Oooh and I do so hope that I am right about him. Aha, and Jackie caught Wood in his lie, lol. ...and she's having a little crying fest in his arms...*sigh* and a kiss?! YAY! *doeslittlecelebratorydancearoundcomputer* SQUEAL!! Ok off to the next chapter :D Report Review
Hey again!! The chapter title had me wondering...and wondering...and wondering... I read it with much anticipation because I really wanted to know who was going to be making out with whom lol. But I did not expect Oliver to go into full playboy mode and just have a lot of arm candy... And the scene in the bedroom? Eeeww!! Wrong!! Not cool letting another girl sleep in their bed. But excellent comeback from Jackie though, hehe. And not to forget Wood's problem... rofl (mind get out of the gutter NOW!! Ah meh... stay there then, it's a lost cause anyway ;)) Oooh and so Tyler likes Jackie, right?? Yikes! Haha, Angelina and Lee...so cute...and George and Alicia..even better. But how mean is Fred, ey? Magical Makeout Mistletoe...bloody brilliant...roll on chapter 10 :))) Report Review
Hey again!!! You watch too much TV?? Me too, lol. Except for now as it is almost summer and all of my favorite shows have a summer break or just stopped...like LOST. And now I am waiting for new seasons of Vampire Diaries and Big Bang Theory...and of course Heroes!!! I do love Peter...and Mohinder (well most of the time anyway). Ok tangent closed...review time: So Jackie has decided to fall in love with Oliver? Ok, maybe more like realised, cos ya know ya can't really DECIDE to fall in love. Sweet though...but WAIT...WHAT??? Is Oliver making this up about this Casey girl or is he actually being serious?? Argh, me wants to know!! M'kay...so she wakes up on top of him...very interesting *wink*..but how did he not notice? Rofl. But now she likes (or wants to like) Tyler again... make up your bloody mind girly (that comment is directed at Jackie lol). Good Chapter and off to the next one :D Report Review
Hey...first of all, I am really sorry to have read about that incident with Charlie and I really sincerely hope that he is doing better. Well off to the review then...
Tyler sounds rather...dishy... lol. But ooh Oliver has fallen in love with Jackie??? Wow...Hmmm...was kinda weird that she lets him tag along to the family meeting. But her step mom (or mum) and sister seem really nice. Her father on the other hand... stupid interrogations...
Mwahahahaha, you are very evil though!! Poor Oliver...saying yes all the time can really get you into trouble *winkwink*
The cemetery scene plus the aftermath of it wree really really sad. How horrible of Jackie's father to blame her for everything when she was just a child... anyways, really good chapter and off to the next one :D Report Review
How mean!! Waking Jackie up like that...well Mr. Wood that was a punch you deserved. I really want to find out what it is that everybody except Wood seems to know about Jackie... maybe you'll explain in later chapters. And why the heck was Turk in the fireplace in the first place? Probably not just to insult Jackie...but oooh Oliver stood up for her/defender her ... so yay :D Report Review
I love the expression "butt-faced miscreant"...you don't happen to be a Gilmore Girls fan, do you?? Anyway, I cannot believe that Jackie agreed to a double date lol, bring on the drama! Rofl...I am so blind sometimes, but now that you mentioned it...dun dun dun... of course the names were from SCRUBS that took me way too long to realise. Hehe, I love tickle fights...shame Lee and the twins interrupted them though. Ah sucky date for poor Jackie, but I gotta agree with you, guys usually have some pretty juicy gossip to tell. And off to chapter 6 :D Report Review
Hey, how anyone could tell you that your story sucks, I dunno. But you definitely have the knack for writing the awkward moments...excellent. I just laughed so much and am absolutely in love with your story. Your writing style is really good and has me gripped, plus the jokes seem to come very easily to you. So off to the chapter then, right? There is just nothing like a water fight with your enemy, locked in a bathroom, ey? Mwaahahahaha I love Professor McGonagall...that was funny picturing her looking at the scene unfolding in front of her as she opened the bathroom door. She rocks, lol. But oh... I should have seen it coming...Lee and the twins having a bet...that is so totally like them lol. Anyways another wonderful chapter and I am off to chapter 5 :D Report Review
Bloody brilliant once again...what with the bathroom and all... Aww...so Jackie does not appreciate a shirtless Wood? Shame, lol. Hehehe, trust them though to go through each other's trunks in pursuit of "decent" bedwear for each other. Haha, the tampon incident was brill, guys are so oblivious sometimes...and that thing with Wood in Divination...well all I can say is...dirty!
Haha, I can just imagine Wood doing his morning run with a girl hanging over his shoulder like it's the most natural thing in the world. And of course the teasing had to continue, but locking them in the same bath room??? Genius, must read more... Report Review
OMG that was such a brilliant idea having Wood and Jackie attached at the waist. This is gonna be hilarious, I can tell. And for sleeping in the same bed...well...rofl. Their friends are kinda mean for teasing them, but hell...who would pass up this opportunity to make fun of Wood and Jackie? And Wood can be such a tosser...in a really funny way with showing off his abs (*drool*) and all that...poor Jackie though... (Ok I'll be honest, I'm jealous lol). Wonderful story so far and off to the next chappie :D Report Review
Hi there!! What a great way to start off a story. I have to say I was quite intrigued at first and tried figuring out what exactly is going on between Wood and Jackie. But OMG him snogging some ditzy girl in front of her had me laughing so much...especially when you wrote the word moaning, I think I may have lost it a bit and had a very immature fit of giggles. Anyways I thought this was a well-written and funny chapter and I cannot wait to read more, so I will be off to chapter 2 :D Report Review
ick, j.d has to be gay to listen to hannah montana
-clea smith Report Review
it was funny! i love this story!
-clea smith Report Review
oh geez! oliver is weird
9/10 Report Review
I loved this chapter! It was amazing (same with the past few as well)! Oliver's point of view was good, don't worry! 10/10! Update soon! Report Review
Hahahaha I love your story it's sooo funny! I also loved your story in the authors note, it sounds hilarious, I'm going to try that sometime! :) Thank you for keeping writing your story! I also love your authors notes they are always interesting and usually pretty funny! :) I LOVE THIS STORY AND CHAPTER!!! Please update really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really soon!!! 10/10! :D :) :P Report Review
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