really good!!!
amazing job.
-coco

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ahh i loved it.=)
and what's even crazier is that i wrote a song fic for this song too!
i love Alexz Johnson and Instant star and am way too excited for the new
season to come around ah

but you should check mine out
and see if it did any justice
it's the second part of this other song fic i did
for Your Eyes by the same loverly girl.=)


this is getting waaaytoo long..lol sorry
yours rocked.the end.

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that is the most perfect song for james and lily thanks i've been lookin for a god one!! :)
Jenna

Author's Response: hehe your welcome? :)

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Sounds a lot like my first kiss. Thought it was okay by the way.

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hmm... an ok story, no ofense but the idea isn't that original, and im getting sick of l/j typical stories. don't worry though, it was still really good.

Author's Response: yeah i know the idea isn't that original but it's a story so i guess cliche is okay...plus i'm sure it sounds overrated but this song was just so them....lol. but thanks for the review!

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beautiful wonderful good story!

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I love this song!
I love Alexz, too

Author's Response: haha i know she's one of my favorite singers. she's kinda AMAZING.

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wow, this is good. i loved it! =D

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it! read my other james/lily story if you want!

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Cute story!! When does it take place though? You should write more stories. 9/10 :)

Author's Response: umm i guess 6th or 7th year? i wasn't really thinking of a time frame. it really just came into my mind one night when i was procrastinating my hw.

but if you liked this story read my other james/lily story who she turned to. thanks!

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This is really good! Awesome writing! 10/10 :D Well Done!

Author's Response: ah thanks!

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