you, person or vampire hoofed mammal or whatever, have got to finish this, or else! (mwahahahahahahaha)! ok, seeya Report Review
Okay, erm, I dont think Hermione would just all of a sudden say "What the eff happened?..." I mean, seriously! Thats totally not Hermione... but good story anyways =D it didnt suck at all. Report Review
I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Hermione deserves a few admirers for, what sounds like, her coming of age in the maturity/looks department. And more to the point -the guys finally noticing. Not quite sure of the Nelson crush? But then our Hermione has never been conventional. If it works...let it rock your boat?!? I'm intrigued by your 'shagadelic' Malfoy- sounds VERY interesting. I may have to practise drooling ever so quietly in the corner. Mind you, if you throw a super sexy Snape in for good measure...I'm definately coming back for more!! Keep going, though some of your grammar could do with a little polishing. Please don't take this as a fic-bash, I genuinely mean it as a constructive criticism. Good luck for more. Report Review
so cool, infact it was so cool, i have put it on my fave storie list. hope to see another chapter soon. byexxx Report Review
i like the story soo far, but it needs to have more things happen in it. Report Review
What do you mean the chapter sucked? IT was the best chapter ever!!! Keep up the hard work!!! Report Review
You should really keep writing- the beginging is perfect! Report Review
keep goin!!! I ORDER YOU!!! I RAN OUT OF THREATS OH WELL, JUS KEEP GOIN' PLZ!!!! Report Review
*puppy dog eyes* Malfoy... got... hunky... *drools heavily* AS IF HE WASN'T HUNKY ENOUGH ALREADY!!! *steals Malfoy and runs off into the distance with him* Report Review
you suck :p Report Review
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