No no no no no no no *sob* no he cant die why. why did you have to make him die.*sad face*.............*happy face* o well other than that it was good. it almost made me cry. but you should have made more detait. ex:
Harry slowly opened his eyes to see ron pacing around his bed and hermione close by. they sudenly relized that he had woken up and rushed to his side.
" O....*sob*..... harry" hermione choked out
" harry ur going to be fine madam pomfree (sp?) is making -
"no......im not.....going to make it......ron..take care of hermione.
hermione already crying started to cry more and ron trying to hold back the tears was unable to, seing the light leving his best friends eyes. harry then took one last look at the two people who had been by his side for almost 17 years as he closed his eyes for the last time. and they knew that inevitable had happened........ He was gone.
THE END
or somthin like that. otherwise good job!!!!!
signed,
the other Padfoot




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wow that was really good! I think it should be longer! I found your pen name reading old reviews for my old fic! And I'm glad i clicked it!!! (my old pen name was MadisonFelton) heh! Anyways! Kudos!

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wicked sequal, sequal, sequal, sequal, sequal

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Thats the poem from As Told By Ginger. I love that poem!

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i am starting a chant it goes like this: "sequal, sequal, sequal, sequal, sequal" P.S= this story is really good!!

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Yes do write a sequal i am begging u Can u review mine Harry Potter and the Slave of the Dark Lord Lol Emmalena

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not bad...

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