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Review #1, by ChiannaMalfoy Chapter 1-The Letter

7th October 2007:
Pretty good, Alexander...I like it. Will most certainly stay tuned, though, just a suggestion, attempt to keep the chapters at about 1500-2000 words. Its like four pages in word.

(I am currently listening to 'yay, the old guy kicked the bucket' or 'seven thousand souls', the JB4 remix, lol)

Author's Response: Thanks George, ya, it needs to be alot longer eh?


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