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Review #1, by ChiannaMalfoy Chapter 1-The Letter

7th October 2007:
Pretty good, Alexander...I like it. Will most certainly stay tuned, though, just a suggestion, attempt to keep the chapters at about 1500-2000 words. Its like four pages in word.

Georgie
(I am currently listening to 'yay, the old guy kicked the bucket' or 'seven thousand souls', the JB4 remix, lol)

Author's Response: Thanks George, ya, it needs to be alot longer eh?

Alex


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