I LOVE THE LISTS. Amongst the four I love Effie the most, I'm not sure why but I guess because she's the craziest of the four. At first I thought she'd be related to Sirius instead of Dawn but it seems like I was wrong lol, I love this.
I didn't see the twists coming at all, abusive boyfriend, lesbians,etc. Lol, it's surprising.
Thanks for writing and hopefully you'll update this in the future :DAuthor's Response: sifhiahfi
This girl got me itching for it, so there probably will be an update in a week or two. I know I've been saying that for about a year now, but this time it's fo' real! Report Review
I'm way loving this story.
My favorite is Drew for some reason, then I like Effie.
They're all so different!Author's Response: Hmm, thank you!
So at first I was concerned this would be just another cliche story with the marauders. But I was wrong! It's very unique. OOC, but I love it. :]
It's a breath of fresh air. I hope you plan on continuing it.Author's Response: I'm very happy you think so!
Thank you so much. Report Review
Ahahahahaha. I love this story so far. It has me laughing ridiculously hard. :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad! :D Report Review
HEY, so excellent chapter once again!
but now all i can say is UPDATE!
please :D **gives pouty face**
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: I will! For you. Report Review
AH, wow. i thought that wren and jamie were totally gonna have a thing.
good twist at the end.
so is wren gonna have a crush on jamie know? what about remus?
oh, the curiosity is killing me. so im gonna read on!
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: Hahahaha :] Report Review
ok, im reviewing again, with the thoughts of a million passion-filled latin dancers. lmao.
and, wow, poor effie. austen is such a jerk, i totally would have never thought it, especially after the first chapter he was in when he was blushing... argh. and he HITS HER? dramatic. i hope effie finds it in her to tell someone. cause austen is officially sick and wrong.
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: Exactly. He's a tool.
Thank you so much! Report Review
ACK, homophobic wren.
although it is totally understandable. every person feels a little strange with things that are different or unusual to them. i know i have. i'm glad you put this in here, because you're right. not everything is all dandy. some people just aren't accepted because of their beliefs, race, appearance, whatever, which is sad, but good job telling it like it is.
good job! keep it up!
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: *tackle hug*
I love you. Report Review
OK, so now i get the dawn/drew thing.
alrighty. well, i think i like drew better, but when you decide, do you think you could go back and change it? because it is very confusing.
and, EFFIE NEEDS TO TELL SOMEONE ABOUT AUSTEN AND HER! its crucial. poor effie. thats so sad.
and, ok, so im going to make a prediction and say, by the end of this story, drew will be dating sirius, lily will at least give james a chance, wren and remus will be going steady, and.. well im not sure about effie.
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: Hee hee hee.
You'll see! Report Review
ok, so you're back to using Drew again. i'm way confused.
good job again!
AWH effie! thats terrible that austen would take advantage of her like that. i thought he was a nice guy too...
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: I'm so sorry! I'll try and fix it. Report Review
HAHA, wow, peter is a tool.
and im happy wren and remus are going to hogsmeade together. i knew it! lol.:P
p.s., when you said Drew last chapter, did you mean Dawn or is Drew a totally different character? i just got a bit confused.Author's Response: Agh! I get that a lot. In the beginning, I couldn't decide between Dawn or Drew. That's why I have complications with the name. Report Review
HA, loved the ending. poor effie.:P
this is such a great story line!
ah, i hope effie and austen get together. that'd be cute.
ok, i've gotta keep reading!
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! Report Review
haha, this is great.
i LOVE the chapter introductions with al the rules. very creative.
and i think the character of wren you've portrayed is excellent. this is good stuff :D
xoxo, LoloAuthor's Response: Thank you for giving me specific compliments! I love that :] Report Review
awww... poor effs!!! well i feel so bad 4 her, i cannot (yes im ritin it out 2 make it longer and did u no that cannot iz 1 word? HOO NEW???) help it! but anywayzerz, so good as usual! 10/10!!! xPAuthor's Response: Thank you very, very much.
[Anywayzerz?] :] Report Review
wow jamie i did not no u felt so strongly about ur sexuality! in case u dont remember or have any idea wth im talkin bout, (i do that sometimes) u said this in ur authors note: 'She's gay cause she demanded to be that way.' so ya. wow that wuz a REALLY bad joke back up there at the beginning. JAZZ i need help. 10/10!!! xPAuthor's Response: Hahaha, it's cool :]
You have no idea just HOW FAR my lameness goes. It made me smile. Report Review
oh its ok, i act like a bunch of 10 yr olds on my own!!! ;D bahaha, austen booth iz a funny kkidddo!!! wow i do not no y i felt like saying that but i did and now its said and now iv said my stuff and stuffed my said and- wow im done. 10/10 for schnitzel!!! xPAuthor's Response: Hahaha :D
Thank you very much! Report Review
ya this is gonna be EXTREMELY short, sadly. cuz its late, im tired, and iv already reviewed this 1ce. so gr8 chappie and i LUFFLEZ bijal (spesh the name) 10/10!!! xPAuthor's Response: Awww... Thank you so much! Report Review
ahaha that last line made me crack up so much
such a good story
i love the introduction's to your chapters
xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :D
aw!!! poor, poor effie! i feel so bad for her!!
p.s. i KNOW drew and siriius will date! thay have to!Author's Response: You'll see!! ;] Report Review
I like Dawn.
And the chapter.
Drew sounds too similar to the name Wren, for some reason. I guess it's because there's pretty much the same letters just switched around... Blah, I dunno. Great chapter! :)Author's Response: Hmm.
Thanks for your opinion!
aww i love this story
especially the sirius/drew story line
and btw i like drew better than dawn :]
cant wait to read more XDAuthor's Response: Hahaha, thank you oh so dearly :] Report Review
lmfao wow sorry idk y im laffing im random like that. anyway amazing job i luv this fic, anyway i like drew alot btr it matches her persona better Dawn is 2 idk like blondie preppie-ish ya kno? Drew is perfect keep itAuthor's Response: I know EXACTLY what you mean.
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ohhh no! poor effie :(. that's terrible! hurry with the next chapter. and PLEASE make her tell someone! that's so bad, someone ought to help her! haha im getting way too into this. loved it though. :)Author's Response: HAHAHAHA!
That's wonderful :]
Thank you oh so dearly. Report Review
Hey there! Good chapter, like the story, but a little confused. So there's Lily, Effie, Wren and Drew - but what happened to Dawn? Maybe I'm suffering from short term memory loss and there's five friends instead of four... I think I need to reread the old chapters. Anyways, good job on this chapter! :)Author's Response: Ah.
I probably mixed up Drew/Dawn's name. :/
I'll fix that right away, thanks! Report Review
omggg this story is A-mazing! (no pun intended) i lurve it! update s0o0o0on! i reeeleee like it! god im rele gunna use this advice no lieAuthor's Response: Yay!!!
I'm glad you like it and you're taking my advice :DD Report Review
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