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Review #1, by Meggles35 The Tale of Sirius

12th March 2010:
I liked that Christine was pretty average character; I'm able to connect with her easily.

I didn't like that I have no idea what she looks like (i hope I didn't skip over anything) and that there aren't anymore chapters for me to read.

Author's Response: ohh wow noone hadreviewed in a year
but i will update especially for you meggles35 :D lol


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Review #2, by soccergirl0388 The Tale of Sirius

5th November 2007:
great story please update soon

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Review #3, by ron_hermione_fan The Tale of Sirius

13th October 2007:
awesome start to the story! Great job! Just one tip, add more detail between the dialog because right now it's almost all dialog. Other then that I really like the idea so update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you:D I did think there was too much dialouge, i'll make sure there isn't as much in the next chapter x

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