Ah! That was brilliant :D Both the first story and the sequel :D You're a great writer, and you managed to portray the emotion really well. Keep it up! :)Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
Thanks for the finish. It was a nice story. I'll be looking for some of your other stories.
Thank you again
MarcAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I hope you keep reading my stories! Thanks for the review. -A Report Review
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hadn't considered spiders for this story. Nice change of pace.Author's Response: I actually considered using Skrewts, but I thought spiders would be easier, since they live in the forest and all. And, if there were loads of Skrewts and two Death Eaters, it'd be too hard on poor Harry. Thanks for reviewing again! - A Report Review
I was so excited when I read that Ginny escaped. = )
So, is Harry gonna be reprimanded for his 'attempted poisoning" of Zabini??
(oh, great job by the way.left me wanting more.)Author's Response: Thinking about the past I created for Zabini, no, I don't think anyone will blame Harry for what he did, but it's a different matter entirely whether or not he (Harry) will be around to hear that. I hope you keep reading (and reviewing)! The next chapter is already in the queue. - A Report Review
I was so into this story I didn't stop to reveiw it in the process. So I've come back to add some in.
Well I liked this chapter. (Well I liked all of them really)
=)Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, honestly, that means a lot to me! (Especially with a story that has 7 chapters and 15 reviews so far...) I'm really glad you like the story. Report Review
great story so far.I'm loving it! Keep up the great work!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
NICE !!! love it keep it up!!!
poor harry geting into truble i hope he gets out!!!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. You'll just have to wait and see what happens. - A Report Review
Oh, dear. Cliffhangers freak me out. You wouldn't kill Harry, right? You're not that mean. =PAuthor's Response: If I was on the right mood, I just might. Actually, the first drafts involved Harry dying, but I won't tell you if I changed them or not. Thanks for reviewing again! Report Review
Um. I don't think Ginny was dead. Going to read the next chapter...Author's Response: Good thinking! ; ) Report Review
Ok, an interesting solution to the problem. Let's see what can be done in the next chapter to keep the action flowing. I like it so far.Author's Response: Whew, no "Avada Kedavra"s at me, then? I hope you like the next chapter too -- writing action really isn't one of my strengths, but I did my best with it. Thanks for reviewing again. - A Report Review
I reread the chapter. Your one of the few writers that place their characters in such danger, in the other stories there is always a way out for them. I don't see it here. As I said yesterday, great story, Chapter 7 soon please.Author's Response: My grandfather used to tell me that you can always find a way to turn things right if you try hard enough. Trust me, there's a way out for everyone -- well, almost everyone. Thanks for reviewing again, I promise I'll do the final updates ASAP! - Alisa Report Review
OK, I'll let you write chapter 7 before I aim a killing curse at you. You have my attention. Keep writting the story, this is getting good.Author's Response: I'm glad that I've got your attention now, and aside from the death threat, it's nice to get some feedback, so thank you. - A Report Review
Good start! I like the last sentence. Can we expect Harry to go on the war path?Author's Response: Yes, eventually. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review! -A Report Review
Wow! Brilliant chapter and story. U really do deserve more reviews. Ur a really good writer. Without a doubt. Keep going!Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the compliments! I agree with you on the review-issue -- it'd be nice to get some feedback. I'm glad you like the story and I hope you keep reading. - A Report Review
Wow. I just finished The Scheme... and I liked it, so I decided to read this as well. You really deserve more reviews; this is a very good piece of writing, and I've seen a lot more for horrible fan-fics. Keep up the great work! =) 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it, and I'm glad you reviewed -- I don't really know what people think of these stories because I don't get a lot of reviews. I'll do my best to keep the story good! - A Report Review
Hi! I love it. Yeah it was ture about my brother's friend's dad... I hope that Ginny will be a alvie.. Oh I add this to mine favorties. Oh I'm going to have a story up soon on November 6 that when I have off from school so i can do it then. It's going to be called Mary's Song (Oh My My My) 100-100! ~Jackie~ hugs kiss @_@Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, again, I'm glad you still like it! - A Report Review
Hi! I love it. I was ILoveLost1888 if I read your story beofore. I can not beville that Ginny is missing. Last June one of my brother's classmants's father went missing and they found him dead. 10-10! ~Jackie~ Author's Response: Seriously? Things like that are always horrible.
Thanks for the review, anyway, and I'm glad you like the story! Report Review
nice work. keeping going.Author's Response: I will. Thanks for the review! Report Review
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