this story gives me the chills !!! its really good and sweet to ^^ 10/10

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Ahhh. XD That creeped me out a bit. But otherwise, it was very, very good :)) Everything flowed well and it was an enjoyable one-shot to read - even if it is the middle of May when I'm reading it :P 10/10

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As always, great story...and bravo on the narrative and description. Your writing style is always a treat. ;) Lava Lue

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Nice, a very good Halloweeny fic, even though I read it out of season. Lol, it's May, and i'm readin Halloween fics, how bored am I?
Anyway, excelent, well written, spooky in just the right spots, all around well done. definitly a 10/10!!
kisses
~*Jenni*~

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oooh, it was Snape wasn't it!??! I was almost hoping it would be one of the deceased Lupins... Very eerie, I loved it! 10/10

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Was the thing with the red eyes Snape? Great story.
Hugs and Cookies
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That was great! :D

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This was a really interesting story. What this she actually see though? One of them...? I'm still intrigued. Yes, I imagine both of them behaving a bit like that. I have always expected Teddy to be the responsible one and also the first one of the two of them to realise his feelings. Actually, I had the same idea regarding the veil between the two worlds. It would have been interesting if they had crossed over, as long as you had brought them back, of course. Nicely written actually!

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This is really scary, a very fine Ted/Victorie too. One of the best of that new ship I've seen so far. Superb Halloween challenge entry.

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Great descriptions.

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this is defenitely one of my favourite stories.=) itz great!

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This was a great story! I think you should have made the part with the ghost a bit longer, but other than that, it was really well written.

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Very nice, indeed. Your portrayal of Teddy and Victoire was quite nice, individuals in their own right but enough of their parents to feel natural in the setting. Liked the little touches (how old is that cat going to get?) that show consistancy with the "old days" but leave room to imagine changes have occurred. The next generation is in good hands with writers like you. I wonder if there is going to be a follow up to this. There doesn't need to be as it tells a full and complete story, but one wonders if Teddy, Vicky and some of the other Potters, Weasleys and Malfoys, etc. would be willing to let this mystery pass by uninvestigated. I'll be keeping an eye out, just in case.
Thank you for your story.

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That was really cute. I don't think I've read a Teddy/Victoire story before and it was nicely done with the Halloween theme. In fact, I think it might just go down as a favorite for a quick and entertaining read.

Emilie
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Ooooh! This is the first 'next generation' fic I've read...and it seemed really perfect :D It's spooky without being OTT - just the kind of thing to be expected from Halloween around Hogwarts/Hogsmeade!!! Awesome stuff ;) Oh, and I think you may just have found me a new ship to follow (in the Teddy/Victoire direction don'cha know!) love it.

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This was very good! It was spooky. I really liked it. It was creepy and very cute at the same time. Happy Halloween!!


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wow tht was really nice (:
& by one of those you do mean werewolves right ? o.o
anyway , great story .
10/10 "D

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Ooh, so creepy! Wonderful. I'm glad that you didn't fully explain what happened to her. It makes it even more shudder-worthy. There was one mistake. Instead of "don't let go of me" you said "don't let go off me" or something like that. Anyway, I really enjoyed this. Great job! :)

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She saw Voldemort? That's creepy! Creepy, creepy, creepy! I love it!

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A very well written story I liked it this was my very first Teddy/Victoire and I must say you have urged me to read more stories about the pairing. This story is definately a Halloween favourite.

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ahhh u really can't stop there!! this is amazing!!! it was so well-written, the face actually scared me!!! great writing it really hooked me in!!!

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i am one of them. i just had to tell you. how did you know about us. hmm... that was pretty good, but i expected a bigger fight, not just little snappy soundbites.

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‘It might’ve been Mrs Norris,’ Teddy suggested. ‘Neill Winters says she’s gone blind – she’s been bumping into all sorts of things this year.’




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ooo this was really good
i loved it
great job!!!
10/10 =)
~AK Carmel ;p

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you sould have made it alot longer. like voldy came back and the weasleys, potters, and lupins all defeat him. like a few chapters or something. other then that i really liked it.

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