Nice story! If I were less tired, I think I'd enjoy it more, but it's a neat idea. You have a good writing style, but you're missing quite a bit of punctuation here and there...and a few words are either missing letters or are used in the wrong context, but so far, so good! Report Review
great! plz update soon!Author's Response: thankyou XD will do xxx Report Review
Oh wow. That week pretty much sucked for Brooke. Poor thing. I think that Lorraine needs to be taught a lesson. lol *cackles manically* Please update soon!Author's Response: oooo, you read my mind with giving Lorraine a lesson ;) and thanks for writing me a review every time, it really spurs me on to write more chapters :D xx Report Review
great chapter! plz update soonAuthor's Response: thankyou :) just waiting for the validation of my next chappie, shouldn't be long *crosses fingers* :D Report Review
Oooo first day of classes and Brooke already made an enemy? Someone works fast. lol Please update soon!Author's Response: yup, she's one fiesty gal :P and chapter 5 is written, gunna upload and wait for validation :D Report Review
I love the story so far, so please update soon!Author's Response: Thankyou again :D :D Report Review
Hey, I just read a Marauders-era story with a Mary MacDonald too!Author's Response: hehe yup, I took her character from Deathly Hallows where we went back in Snapes memory :P Report Review
Nice beginning!Author's Response: Thanks :D xx Report Review
Coolness! Please update ASAP!Author's Response: thankyou, glad you like it :) and i definately will post chapter 4 ASAp:D xx Report Review
Update soon! Author's Response: thankyou, I will! I'm aiming to post chapter 4 before I go away for the half term hols on Saturday, and hopefully when i'm gone it will have been validated! :D Report Review
the girls sound friendly!Author's Response: yep she is, but not with her enemies which you shall meet within the next few chappies! :) xx Report Review
It was a little shrt but still good. Please update soon!Author's Response: lol thanks, will do! :) xx Report Review
I like this story so far. It's really good!Author's Response: thankyou, hope you like my other chappies! :) xx Report Review
really really cuteAuthor's Response: hehe yep and theres more to come :) xx Report Review
I like it! More as soon as you can! 10/10Author's Response: thankyou so much! 10/10 woop woop! :) xx Report Review
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