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Review #1, by essenni Weakness

1st December 2007:
This is very interesting. I imagined that Bella would see something completely different.

Author's Response: Me too, but whatever I imagined Bella seeing, seemed too cliche. So I'm glad I caught you off guard. Is that a good thing?

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Review #2, by Pretty Purple Pelican Weakness

28th October 2007:
Very well written. I liked your portrayal of Bellatrix a lot. I also liked that she actually went inside the mirror, rather than just standing on the edge. It really immersed her in the memory. Nice job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks PPP! That's the element that I think separates Hogwarts' student magic and powerful magic that has probably been learned by more than a few unorthodox ways...or maybe just because I thought something should be different. ;)
Thanks for the review!


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Review #3, by inkismyworld Weakness

1st October 2007:
ooo interesting take on what Bellatrix saw in the mirror I believe you portrayed her well when she did not go all emotional/ sappy. The epitaph was suiting as well :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I was a little unsure about the epitaph, but I figured a character like bellatrix has no room for tears and the like. Just a girl crazy with regret of how she could have lived her life. Glad you liked it!

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Review #4, by moonysgirl Weakness

29th September 2007:
Vivid descriptions of the emotions without carrying on for pages. Wonderfully done.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's what I was aiming for. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #5, by Lorddavo Weakness

27th September 2007:
Very good description great add on chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. I couldn't quite tell by your grammar, but yes, I do enjoy writing missing scenes. Glad you liked it.

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