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:DAuthor's Response: Well thanks! :) Report Review
Your story is...lovely! just like it should be, with all that trust that Luna make us feel. Perfect!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review! Report Review
Oh my goodness. That was possibly one of the best one-shots I've EVER read. And let me tell you, I've read quite a few! Your portrayal of Luna was superb, same with Draco. Also, that last line was utter perfection.Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
aww. It was a pleasure to read.Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
You are a really gifted writer, being able to get so much into these one shots. I would really like to read and know more about every one of them I read, but when I think about it, you've got just enough into them to make them perfect.
Like this one, I would have loved to see more of what happens later. But at the same time not, because you left the rest for our imagination, but it's not killing us to think about the rest like it was whenever JK left things off. If you know what I mean?
So simple and so sweet... I loved it! Favorite!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a bit of a one-shot addict, to be honest. It's easiest to write them in the little time that I have. Thank you again for your review! :) Report Review
I loved this one-shot! I'm sure Luna must be hard to write, but you captured her essence beautifully. All the dialog was spot on, and I enjoyed Draco and Luna's interactions. I loved the last line, too: "I'll miss you." It was a perfect ending. ^_^Author's Response: Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me. She's a hard on. Thank you!! :) Report Review
Just as I finished I could not stop myself from thinking "Oh this is so cute!"
I love the Draco/Luna pairing, it's one of those fun, but unexpected ones you can never really picture easily, but it's great and interesting when you do!
Loved your story.
LadySoftballAuthor's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! :) Report Review
This was a really great idea and nicely written. I really enjoyed it.Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
oh that was so beautiful...I loved it:DAuthor's Response: Aww, thank you! :) Report Review
Haha, that was cute. I like how you view pointed Luna in this fic. Barely anyone does it to my liking but it seemed like J.K. Rowling would do it if she were writing this scene. Malfoy is pretty close considering. I really liked it overall. Oh I caught one grammar mistake in the third paragraph and this time I wrote it done in case you asked for it.
"He not even want to think of the horrors he had just unleashed."
Hope I helped. And again, good job. =D 9/10Author's Response: I've always had trouble writing Luna. I try to keep to canon as much as I can. Thank you! I'll go back and get that :) Report Review
the way you portrayed luna was exactly how i picture her..awesome job.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I really struggled to make her canon. She's such a difficult character, though. :) Report Review
thats so precious. :]Author's Response: Well, thanks! :) Report Review
Very sweet one-shot. :) Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Oh I loved it!! I'm a huge Draco/Luna fan and I thought this was lovely! Very well written. Author's Response: Well, I'm not much of a Draco/Luna author, so I'm glad that you liked it! :) Report Review
that's so sweetAuthor's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
Aw.. what an amazing story...Author's Response: Well, thanks! :) Report Review
That was so beautiful... I loved the last sentence; so adorable. This is actually the first Draco/Luna I've read and I like the idea of them together, but without all the lovey-dovey stuff. The way you captured it, seemed way much more realistic. 10/10 and great job :) Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I know. They don't really fit with the lovey-dovey stuff. Even when briefly writing Neville/Luna I had problems keeping it realistic, so I'm really glad that you liked it :) Report Review
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