Reading Reviews for Harry Potter Against the World
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ROBERT__1958 Training

12th November 2007:
Great chapter.

Please update soon?

Author's Response: i'll try to do it as soon as possible but i am under a heavy workload at the moment. Thanx for reviewing!

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Review #2, by Kathy_Reyes Training

6th November 2007:
You do know that another story got Serena Black as main character. There are way too much facts that belong to other stories, I would advice you to come up with something new, and dont mix up stories of other people. I hope u dont continue but start a new story this is stealing.

Author's Response: which story is that?

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Review #3, by Sorvik Summer Confrontation

21st October 2007:
Strange, just got done reading another 4 story (been up for a long time) series where someone named Serena Black (also daughter to Sirius) was in it...

Your writing keeps switching between past and present tense. Make it a bit confusing when reading.

Author's Response: sorry but it was just to speed it all up a bit. It will all be in the present soon enough. Thanx for reviewing!

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Review #4, by ROBERT__1958 Padfoot Returns

20th October 2007:
Great story. I realy like this story.

Please update soon?

I hope Harry & Serena will both get phoenixs.

I hope Harry and Serena will get married or at least be boy/girlfriends.

I hope Serena get her full powers back. This step was not told so far.

Rating: 10/10

Author's Response: Thanx for pointing out my error and i was wondering about the phoenix idea as well! Thanx for reviewing!

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Review #5, by nightmare Summer Confrontation

18th October 2007:
Ok.. So I think it is going good so far. I really like it! Just wondering about the Harry/Cho thing because I really don't wanna read about them together i like the Harry/OC going on.

Author's Response: Don't worry it's not going to be anything major! I don't like her (hint hint).

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Review #6, by makotochi Summer Confrontation

4th October 2007:
Decent start I do wonder Harry/Cho? Triangle, multi, or is it a one way thing?

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