{reviewid: 1948777, reviewer: 'Mrs%20X'}
11th June 2008:
Is there some significance about naming her after a place in Scotland?
Or did it just occur to you that it was, like, a super awesome name?
Have a nice day,
Mrs X
Author's Response: no its just a super awesome name!!
and thanks..I will
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{reviewid: 1905167, reviewer: 'Gryf_Queen'}
25th April 2008:
I like your story but it is really short. Keep updating and try to make it longer.. :) Keep it up 9/10
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{reviewid: 1759054, reviewer: 'irishMMM'}
19th December 2007:
love it.but did you notice that you change tenses?
Author's Response: yes, actually I have just realized that
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{reviewid: 1757811, reviewer: 'Ginnymac'}
18th December 2007:
Good again Story and plot really are coming a long and the idea and story are great
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{reviewid: 1757800, reviewer: 'Ginnymas'}
18th December 2007:
He has a sister?? This is really good I could just see james saying that to his younger sister as well!
Author's Response: he does now! :)
thank you. I could too. Im glad you like it
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{reviewid: 1749088, reviewer: 'blondeandbright'}
| Review #6, by blondeandbright | Mystic |
11th December 2007:
Hope you update soon. like i said before it needs more of a plot and needs to actually be going somewhere. Love toms entrance. :)
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{reviewid: 1749086, reviewer: 'blondeandbright'}
11th December 2007:
hey. love it. this is some of your best work. Its excellent. very intellectual and creative. good vocab. try having more of a plot though there isn't much of one here.
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{reviewid: 1698435, reviewer: 'ronaldlovr'}
4th November 2007:
love it
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{reviewid: 1694807, reviewer: 'irishMMM'}
2nd November 2007:
This is realy good!
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{reviewid: 1694805, reviewer: 'irishMMM'}
2nd November 2007:
adore this chapter
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{reviewid: 1683794, reviewer: 'irishMMM'}
25th October 2007:
Love the inside the story story...creative writeing right?
adore it, this is definately your best story write more cause i want to know what happens next!
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{reviewid: 1674742, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
18th October 2007:
James is so mean!
Author's Response: sorry thats just the way it is so far it should some what chage when he ....well I wont tell you that yet...read more...I should be updateing soon!
:)
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{reviewid: 1674577, reviewer: 'HarryPottersWhezzy'}
| Review #13, by HarryPottersWhezzy | Vacuous |
18th October 2007:
Did, I not just read/review the last chapter! Oh well, that little story was so cute, was it yours? UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: yes, actually it was written for a project for my creative writing class and just happened to be sitting in front of me while i wrote the chapter so I decided to write it in...
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{reviewid: 1674562, reviewer: 'HarryPottersWhezzy'}
18th October 2007:
An update, yay! So is James always going to be a stuck up, prick with his head up his ass, about this whole sister thing! UPDATE!
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{reviewid: 1674446, reviewer: 'irishMMM'}
18th October 2007:
really enjoyed this story. can't wiat to read more, update soon
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{reviewid: 1674445, reviewer: 'irishMMM'}
18th October 2007:
absolutely adore it. You should write more like this.
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{reviewid: 1650636, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
30th September 2007:
james seems so mean...
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{reviewid: 1650070, reviewer: 'Girldetective85'}
30th September 2007:
Good beginning! You've nicely shown how hard it is to be in an older sibling's shadow, especially if the sibling is James Potter. This is great :)
Author's Response: thank you thats one of the best comments I've recieved! :)
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